Game Pioneer

Feel like the author is a newbie? Let's talk about the problem first. First, the issue of typesetting. There is a problem if a paragraph exceeds 5 lines. It's a long paragraph that makes people have no desire to read it. So this needs to be changed. After the author finishes writing and uploads it, open the mobile version or the computer version and take a look. If it exceeds 5 lines, it needs to be changed. Second, there is too little foreshadowing of game settings This is a game article, so there must be a lot of settings. Which game the author draws from, he must consider readers who have never played it. The article starts with level 60, so there should be a chapter that briefly describes the upgrade progress of the game before level 60, otherwise it will be very confusing. Then there are skills and dungeons. This is very important. After reading it, I didn't understand what the skills were or what the dungeon settings were. This is serious, it completely excludes potential people who have never played this game. How to introduce the dungeon and how to introduce the characteristics of the profession requires the author to figure it out himself. It should not be too bloated or unclear. Then there is a general introduction to the game. When a new area is opened, how many days will it take to reach 60? Is it 60 for the main line or something else? Taking out one chapter is completely conducive to the understanding of the whole text. Third, the problem of character design Nine chapters, I have no sense of immersion in this protagonist at all. I would say he is a master, but he doesn't have the temperament of a master, and the other supporting characters are not bright either.          ，，，，， This is the content of nine chapters, but it feels like the progress is too fast and too empty. In novels, it is worth noting the necessary plot description surrounding the characters. Then let's talk about the last question There are many typos, missing words, and confusion. It is up to the author to check this after he writes it. The best thing is to finish writing a paragraph and read it yourself to see if it makes sense and whether the concepts described are accurate. Okay, I've talked a lot, and I don't know if you like it or not. Writing is quite difficult. If you want to write some results, then change it. Add some more content to the nine chapters to make it more exciting, and it will be about 15 chapters.