Immortal Buwen

Story background: The world of Xianxia (Zhutian). Story style: traditional fairy tale. Brief review: At the beginning of the story, the protagonist abandons someone at a grand ceremony and leaves with a robe. The story returns to the world where he once slept. He! Slumbered for three years. And when he wakes up, he will become an immortal! However, there is a way to practice! The protagonist also knows that he has traveled to that world. This is an "opportunity". But "fate" needs to be solved by oneself. Contacting the head of the family to save his chance, he embarked on a long road to immortality... Waiting for him to cultivate and become an immortal! The opportunity will surely come to an end! To summarize: a story with a very grand background. As for the subject matter, since I don't like Xianxia personally, it's hard to comment on it. But when it comes to writing, I personally suggest that you, the author, practice more! Chapter 1 Personally I think this should be changed a lot! I just deleted it and re-wrote it. Many of the characters and descriptions are very messy... But I can see the foreshadowing, so I personally recommend a major overhaul. Note! This book review is because I only tried to read the previous article, so the evaluation is relatively one-sided and is for reference only! It will be integrated and published in the article scanning circle and new book investment circle. Call the author.

This post also records the author's update data and daily complaints. 🌹🌹 (PS: Additional updates: 500 cumulative reward points will be added; more than 100 recommended tickets will be added; five monthly passes will be added; in addition to additional updates, daily updates will still be issued!)

First, a novel about a genius male protagonist cultivating immortality, no CP! Second, the protagonist is not the type who is too wise and almost evil. He will grow up slowly. Third, the 49-year experience of a man wearing a woman's clothes, the protagonist lives a very simple life, and has not experienced big storms and mental vicissitudes, so don't call him naive, he will grow up step by step... (What can you do in the world of immortality for 49 years? In the later period, a hundred years will be counted in seclusion.) Fourth, a tribute to "The Young Master Stays in Immortality" by Pan Dongliu, highly recommended! (Unfortunately, it was a sinkhole that had been trapped for four or five years.) The name of the banished immortal list in the book came from Dongliu Dada (I tried many ways to get Dada's consent, but all ended in vain). Fifth, the author has been too busy recently and the updates are unstable. I will make sure to update a little bit every day. I will record it before it reaches 2,000 words. I will update it for everyone after I am busy during this period. (Content will be updated daily. If the content is less than 1,000 words, a free chapter will be sent; if it is more than 1,000 words, a VIP chapter will be sent. Please understand, this period is really critical! Sorry!) (Additional updates: additional updates if the accumulated reward points are 500 points; additional updates if the cumulative recommendation votes exceed 100; additional updates if there are five monthly tickets; additional updates will be issued depending on the situation on holidays; in addition to additional updates, daily updates will still be posted!) Thank you again for your support!

I saw no heroine. Come and support me. It's not easy to write a fairy tale. Come on.

I came here after seeing it on Tieba. It's really good-looking, but there are too few. I support it. I feel that the post-production setting is quite huge. It is estimated to be a million words. Hahaha. This is the pace of writing for several years. I just hope it doesn't get messed up. Then I think the family volume is very good. It's not verbose at all. Thank you very much. Can you add more (>^ω^<)

I believe that friends who have read my last two chapters have discovered that the author is a bad name. Most of the characters appearing now have no names, let alone those who have not yet appeared... Please help! A nice name, a desired character, or interesting things can be included in the article. Thank you for your support! 🌹🙏

How old is the protagonist mentally, including the time he traveled through time, and he is still so tired😥😥

The cover has been changed again? This cover feels like a romance novel

I'm from Wuba, support the author, the writing is great, keep up the good work🌹🌹🌹

But then again, the protagonist is male, why is it a female channel?

It's a bit long-winded, and some things don't need to be explained in such detail. It's obviously a small matter, but I procrastinated and wrote half a chapter. It's still an aspect of etiquette that has nothing to do with cultivating immortals, so I can just touch it in one stroke. If this were to be put on the shelves, it would have a few words, so it would be more concise.

Surprise~ The author is about to start writing the article he has been saving for so long! Come on ^0^~

Will his character become that indifferent later on? What is being done in front of you like a coquettish girl? Hold it high, Mom. Don't write anything about smiling bitterly or touching your nose.

Come to Tieba and watch again!

I wandered over from the post bar, the author is great, come on (๑´∀`๑),