The Lost Traces of Dian Kingdom

Story background: modern city. Story style: first person, modern literature. Brief review: At the beginning, the protagonist's family of four took a train to Kyoto, a crowded place. Grandpa, grandma, and sister came here to see the great architecture of China, while the main character came here to study. Coming from a distant foreign land to this unknown metropolis, experiencing the vicissitudes and confusion of people's hearts, our protagonist slowly learned what vicissitudes and years are.
 So! Children who start from school and enter society! Where should he go, and what is the voice in the dream? To summarize: It can be said that this is a very simple story. There is no golden finger at the beginning, nor powerful superpowers, but just a slow experience of life. But for Chunpu, I personally feel that there is a drawback here, that is, the author has brought in too many dialects! Remember, it's too much, not too much. Suggestions: It can be seen that the author's writing style needs to be improved. There are too many typos in the first three words and the wrong use of punctuation marks. (It becomes less and less later) It is recommended that you read it again after you finish writing. Another point is that I suggest the author remove the dialect. It can be used, but not too much. By the way, one more thing, author, you may be in the wrong category.

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The main character setting of the first chapter "The Day of Awakening": Zhao Dingyi: a freshman at the First Normal University, with a family background and a passion for ancient culture since childhood, majoring in Chinese language and literature. Zhou Nanling: The protagonist's cousin, majoring in dance. She is smart, cute, beautiful and generous, but even eighteen cows can't stop her from acting like a young lady. Appears in both the first and second chapters. Xu Tiantian: The protagonist's first girlfriend appears in memories. Xiao Yao: The protagonist's friend from Liancheng's hometown, a know-it-all, and a bit player. Fatty (Guo Tao): The protagonist's classmate and a disciple of a high-ranking official. He is greedy for money and lustful, but he values ​​love and justice. Liu Yong: The protagonist's bedmate is very insightful and thoughtful, but he is cautious and cautious, but lacks courage. Chen Zhen: The protagonist sleeps with his best friend and is physically capable. He has a kind face but a cruel heart, and is very good at pretending. Li Chuyang (Little Sun): The main goddess, throughout the story, the entanglements of love and hate in the past life (stay tuned.) The main character setting of the second part "The Hidden Mist": Kuang Yi: one of the protagonist's brothers. Sexy and bold, wife killer. From birth to death, brave and fearless. Sponsors. Zhou Bin: There is a knife hidden in a smile and speculation. He is good at emotional kidnapping and does not have a happy ending. Wang Yuheng: One of the protagonist's brothers, he is a soldier and a computer expert. He is humorous and sensible yet calm. Yan Qin: One of the protagonist's brothers, he is rational and calm yet wild and fearless. Li Qing: One of the protagonist's brothers. He is a non-commissioned officer and is responsible for the military. He can fight one against three. Luo Yuewen: One of the protagonist's brothers. He is a retired sergeant. He is not weak in combat, but he often gets into trouble with lust.

Sincerely thank you [Xie Mei Nishang] for your valuable suggestions. The wedge part has been greatly modified, and we sincerely invite all viewers to appreciate it. The dialect part of Chapters 1 to 6 is currently being revised, please look forward to your review.

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It can be seen that the author really put his heart into writing. After reading the wedge, I couldn't help but keep reading~ The most important thing is that I learned a lot! ! ! Come on＾0＾~ It's a pity that the level is not enough and I can't invest. I feel that I will definitely not lose money if I invest 😁😁

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It's not easy to write so much. Not bad. Come on, it's accepted!

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Due to Yishui's work, I cannot update every day. Therefore, the speed of supplementary updates is worrying. But Yi Shui will insist on writing it and complete it. It has already reached 300,000 words, and Yishui will not give up. It's just that poetry and the distance are more important to fill my stomach.

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