The Mentor Who Lives Underground

There's too much nonsense. I've been writing for so long and I haven't seen any students.

The author also made too many clerical errors, especially about data. He was too careless. The previous paragraph was still worth 200 million, but the next paragraph changed to 2 billion. The lord's mirror would turn into the palace lord's mirror from time to time. The reading experience was almost the same as watching a pirated version...

There are so many chapters and we haven't gotten to the point yet! Author, you need to know that the protagonist you are writing is a mentor, and the title of the novel is also a mentor. This should be the main plot! Are you off topic?

The author's writing skills are very good and he describes the story really well.

This book is well-written and logically written, and seems quite enjoyable. Come on.

The portrayal of the protagonist is quite delicate, which is good! ! !

During follow-up, bubble and refuel.

~Written with personality! ~! !

Great, great, it would be even better if it could be faster.

The author has a rare writing style and plot in this book. The writing skills are solid and profound, and it is beautiful.

The author's perspective switching in this novel is very tense, and the sentences are relatively fluent, the details are described very well, and the plot arrangement is very convincing.

Approximately how many chapters are left? ? ? My heart is almost broken waiting. . . . . . .

There is really too much baggage. It is very enjoyable to watch and the connection is very natural. I hope the protagonist's character can be more domineering.

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Isn't the protagonist just for change? Why did Tong Yu give up?

Keep writing, I really want you to write tens of thousands of words a day, and I will give you the recommendation votes for 4 chapters every day, so work hard! 🤝🤝🤝🤝