Floating World

After reading eighteen chapters, I always had the feeling that I had missed a season, something was wrong. It's not smooth, and I always feel unclear when reading it.

It's not like it's martial arts because of some Xuan Dao Tong gods like Xian Xia, it's not like it's Xian Xia either. I saw that half of the authors didn't confirm it, and there were a lot of unnecessary battles. Just like that prostitute who could make a powerful father and son fight against each other regardless of what the outside world said? Is it just because the prostitute is beautiful? And that father is already several decades old, so he doesn't have the willpower to run a big power? Please, silly X, you won't do this! An old gambler dared to take in someone who even sold his daughter as gambling capital. I don't know where he got the courage to take him in. The pig's trotters are still people with the memories of people with modern experiences. When I saw the back part, I was really in no mood to watch it. It felt like **, and it didn't make me want to watch it at all.

It feels really disgusting when the protagonist meets an enemy and lets him kill him, so he can't force additional scenes to advance the plot.

Bring the article "Legend of the Black Eagle in the Legend of Wulin Fengyun Lu" to top it off, we are both newcomers, let's encourage each other!

The writing is quite good, but it doesn't seem to be popular. The plot is a bit awkward, but the narrative ability of the writing is definitely better than that of most other authors. It's a pity.

The protagonist has no clear personality and feels very awkward. Being appointed an official in Qi State feels very abrupt and too stiff. The protagonist is arranged entirely for the development of the story. There is no goal and it is very holy. I can't read it.

Looking at the directory level, there is no sense of hierarchy.