The First Case

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It's too ink-written. It would take several chapters to write whether you want to prove yourself or not. Crime-solving articles are all about compact plots and high suspense... It's so boring that I really can't finish reading it.

For those who wanted to see the case, the result was that it was scratchy and watery, and the heroine was jumping up and down like a fool. The relationship with the male protagonist is also inexplicable. It seems that the female protagonist is a fairy. She appears like a long time ago. There are young scholars, Tan Wu Su, Nie, and of course the male protagonist. I am confused. She just appears. How hungry and thirsty these men are for women. You can imagine that a man of fifteen or sixteen years old, seriously injured, with a sallow complexion, was first rescued from a mass grave, then became a beggar, and finally became a widower. Just like this, she has looks but no appearance, and has a figure but no figure. As for her status, she is probably better than a brothel girl. She can be said to be useless. Men with low status like her, and men with high status also love her. It's really hard not to complain about it... Give up

In the beginning, Po Wu, who begged to survive, spent all her coat and half a piece of pancake in order to save the heroine who was hanging by a thread. Such a person, when he almost froze to death and starved to death, could pay so much for a heroine whom he had never met. , Why did she suddenly change after more than ten chapters, and become like a snobbish mother-in-law, who despises this and that? What purpose could there be in saving the heroine in Wu Po's situation? This made the person so annoying for no reason, and the change was too fast, right?

The story is quite interesting, but the pace is too slow and not compact enough.

I can't stand it anymore. No, that should be said. I really have been patiently watching. The plot is actually pretty good. The author still needs a lot of effort in writing. Write the characters in vernacular. The heroine and the hero are the Bai Yueguang of this book. The supporting characters in it all look like idiots. The princes who took over the throne were all too stupid. There is also an inexplicable love for the heroine. Exercise well author. It's good to have ideas, but there's really too much room for improvement in writing.

I haven't looked at it for more than a week and found that there is no progress. Waiting for the county magistrate's public trial

Uh-huh, there is no specific description of the plot, the case is also vague, and the characters are a mess. In the beginning, Granny Wu was kind and saved the heroine. She gave her only coat and pancake to the heroine, but in the back she was stingy and returned. The house is full of chatter, buttons and searches, harsh like an evil mother-in-law, the preface and the follow-up are inconsistent, the character collapses, and Yin Jiuming also inexplicably showed kindness to save the heroine, but later said that she was suspicious and cruel and wanted to be put in jail? ? ? The character design is simply speechless. Later, Nie Xuan in Yizhuang is inexplicably going to go home with a sallow and thin woman of sixteen or seventeen? ? ? ? ? The writing style is unfamiliar and the logic is confusing.

I am very interested in the title and introduction of the novel, but I am a bit dissuaded by the comments. I would like to ask those who read the book seriously to clear it up.

The beginning of the novel is quite abrupt and confusing. Is this the work? Acknowledge?