The Legend of White Snake Cultivation to Immortality

Are you a female channel boss? I'm a bit scared.

The writing is very good, the emotions are well laid out, and the descriptions are all there. I've read the first 62 chapters, it's my type

It's rare to see such a detailed novel. Otherwise, it is to give a very grand world map at the beginning and let the protagonist follow the main line of the world like a quick tour. Otherwise, it is to start from a small level but the logic is confused and reversed. In my opinion, novels are like life. They are not all step-by-step, but sometimes they progress rapidly, and sometimes they are stuck in the mud and waste time. I hope Mei Suer can grow up safely, and no matter what choice she makes, she will do as she pleases.

The author's writing is really good, I support it! In fact, it doesn't matter whether there is a male protagonist or not. After all, the protagonist was also a female in her previous life. And Xiaoyou is pretty good too, and he's pretty good as the male lead.

Because Zhuo Yue abandoned the article. What I hate the most is this kind of person who relies on you after helping her. He is like a candy, he has no self, but the heroine likes him and he has more scenes.

The previous article was very good, but after entering the Qingxian Sect, I became more and more depressed. The heroine seemed to have changed. Others talked about her. She was obviously practicing, but in the eyes of others, she was lazy. In the face of other people's ridicule and comments, nothing can be done. This kind of behavior is like not fighting or grabbing, like an old man who doesn't care about anything around him. But don't forget, the protagonist is a demon, and the original intention of practicing is just to survive and live forever. I don't know how many times I would have died if I didn't fight for it in the Shuijing Forest for decades. But entering a sect is like changing your personality. If you don't fight or grab, then why are you still joining the sect? What's the point? Zhuo Yue is a good girl and loyal to the protagonist, but the protagonist shows his attitude towards Zhuo Yue. To be honest, I can imagine that the two people will definitely fall apart in the end. No matter how good the relationship is, they need to maintain each other. If one-sided efforts are not rewarded, such a relationship cannot last long. I hope I will write better and better in the future! ! !

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I felt like it was a great novel. The heroine's golden finger was wider than a vat, and resources were sent to her desperately, for fear that she would not be the best in the world.

There must not be a male protagonist, take a look first, come on

Come on, author＾0＾~very porridge

Although there are still some shortcomings, I think it is very interesting! It's the feeling of a steady stream of water! It doesn't go against common sense! There is no such thing as in other novels where you clearly know that this person will have troubles if he doesn't die, but you don't take any action. It feels super fake! But there is no such thing as this novel! Very common sense! Like! Like it very much!

The early chapters of these chapters seem quite comfortable, especially the character of the heroine, which I admire very much. It reminds me of White Snake. Ignoring the cruelty at times, it is a bit jarring. Many other parts are very realistic and realistic. However, what makes me speechless is that the description of many supporting characters is very vague. There are many old people or some A, B, C and D. I think it is better not to write them. In this way, the supporting characters have no sense of existence at all, and it is more like an autobiography of the heroine. The whole pattern is not vivid.

The author's writing is very good and the storyline is also very good. Is it just that the author is a fan of Gu Long? This way of writing looks too tiring😒

I also want to ask the author if he is a fan of Gu Long. Personally, this way of writing is a bit boring for me to read. I have watched 44% of the content so far, and there is no exciting fighting scene at all. The fighting content is just brushed off 😅. There is no malicious intention in the above content, it is purely my personal opinion.

Senior brothers are all just looking for sex.

Well, I jumped and looked behind me. Fortunately, Green Snake would not be with Jiang Mulang. But this Min is really haunted. I can understand the need for a villain, but being haunted all the time is really as disgusting as eating a fly.

Miss. . . There is a mistake in Chapter 3. . . It's her, you wrote him as a boy. . . Change it

Ah, I might ask, is it firm and non-CP? You won't write any bloody plot about touching and kissing here and there to express your love in return for a favor, right? If not, I'll be in trouble

This book looks good at first, but there are too many irrelevant people in the back, and there are too many descriptions of their emotions, making it look very messy. What's more, the protagonist is a rich man, and he can do everything with his strength. He doesn't know anything about weapon refining, alchemy, or basic magic. Well,,, I want to raise a snake that is a cultivator because it is good at fighting. It doesn't need human fireworks. Just to cultivate immortality and only know how to practice. A bit so unreal

What shocked me was that Minzhen actually survived to the finale without dying? ! !

And when she was a snake, it was written that she practiced very hard. Before she joined the sect, she practiced swordsmanship. After entering the sect, she would only act cute and sleep, and even moved a recliner to sleep in public. She didn't know that she was a demon, so don't overact it... It was forced to be written as being ignorant of the world. Wasn't she a human in her previous life? Still living a very hard life

Damn, when the new book is released, please remember to notify me

I was enjoying reading it, but suddenly I realized that it was written by a female protagonist... Bye bye

If nothing else, the writing is really beautiful!

Not bad! I came here from another White Snake Cultivation book.

I feel like today's novels are becoming more and more unreadable. Men write about harems with pretense and slaps in the face, while women write about coquettishness, cuteness and dog licking. Do you have any recommendations for novels with pure story lines, no special depiction of love and love, and no harem, pretense, slaps in the face, coquettishness and cuteness?

If I have time in the future, I would like to review it again 😍, it's very interesting and recommended.

Is the author still around? Just give me a shout if you are here so that I can take the time to subscribe. If you are not here... Hehe, then don't blame me

So far, I feel that the old man is as powerful as Yuanshi Tianzun. He can teach without discrimination.

It's quite strange. Isn't it a snake demon? He really thinks of himself as a human being?

Seeing the turbulence and development of the cultivation era reminds me of the Three Kingdoms. The closer you get to the back, the better it looks. It has its own style.