I Have a Dip Card

The more I look at it, the more frustrated I feel. I don't know what the use of a lucky card is. Pig's Knuckle is an unlucky kid. The higher his strength, the more he gets bullied. He also feels bad when he is bullied and turns around. It's annoying!

This character's story and background don't match up That Mu Feng is so disgusting to put here The first 20 chapters are really strong enough to persuade him to quit Writing a novice, just choose the city honestly The end of the world... Forget it

After reading nearly a hundred chapters, there are many inconsistencies, a lot of unreasonable writing, and the character design of the protagonist is also weird. It is estimated that many people were poisoned by that survival point. The survival point that can only crawl is a problem for people's daily life. The author writes as if nothing happens to everyone. I hope everyone's poison resistance is high enough. I couldn't bear it and withdrew it first. It was a pity that such a good subject idea was lost. 🙂

I thought it was a good book after reading the introduction. I was reading it despite being poisoned, but I couldn't help it anymore. I almost turned into an idiot while reading it.

Write a book review! Now I have read Chapter 77, and I really can't stand it any longer, so I deleted it. Let me start by saying that the conclusion is poisonous Have you ever seen a novel in which the writing gets worse and worse? I feel like someone was replaced later? The novel was very creative at the beginning, and the writing was okay, but the writing got worse and worse, especially in terms of the protagonist's data panel. It looked like there was no plan at first glance. The system flow system is the highlight and even plays an important role in promoting the plot. However, the author obviously did not plan the panel well. As for the writing, you are not required to be colorful. At least don't write it as a running account. Don't write anything else. It's so awkward. It's clearly written smoothly at the beginning, but it gets worse and worse later on. It's really confusing. I don't know if the author can't control so many characters. By the 77th chapter I read, not to mention facial expressions, the characters started to become more and more dull and homogeneous, even worse than NPCs. And compared with the beginning, the characters who appeared later seemed more and more brainless, just like those who have been collectively dehumanized. Another one is the atmosphere, which is too white. Not only does it not sublimate, but it makes the readers feel extremely embarrassed The other one is the battle scene, the battle with the golden ape in Chapter 77. What is this about? Is this a battle scene? I didn't dare to write like this in the Qidian novels written in the past 20 years. The gap between before and after is so big that I can't believe it was written by the same person I think you will also find that as you read it, it becomes more and more inconsistent

The routines are relatively old, the emotional descriptions are confusing, and they are still at the same level as Xiaobai Shuang's novels from 15 years ago. I feel that they are not worthy of the title of great god now, but they are indeed in line with my impression of most "great god" titles from Qidian 😒

Where is this book? Even if it's good-looking, it's not particularly good-looking. It's not good-looking! It's not particularly ugly. I have read more than 400 chapters, and they are basically fighting all the time. There are not many descriptions of other characters. There is basically no introduction to the skills after the introduction. Most of the skills are not used and are not introduced. Except for the introduction at the beginning, the skills are basically not introduced, only fusion. The experience of the male protagonist is a bit bad. He is basically fighting throughout the whole process. The male protagonist gives me the feeling that he has no soul. [I only read more than 400 chapters, and I haven't read the rest.

Dedicated to those idiots who talk about Hu Niu all day long! This book can hardly withstand the poisonous poison of Hu Niu! Are those who are fooling Huniu hoping that no one will read this book? I don't know what the author's mentality was when he wrote that damn thing! Really poisonous! Several of my roommates gave up on reading this book with me! He also laughed at the author for forcing him to quit! It took me a long time to pick it up and read it! I always skip the chapters with Huniu in them! The result is still disgusting! There are a lot of people in the comment area who are swiping Huniu! I don't know if the author can see it! Because one character makes me a bookworm! The author successfully persuaded me to quit! I came back today and read a few chapters! In the end, he was still severely poisoned! Forgive me for giving up!

The black stone man's skills were quickly pasted by Tang Rui! Chaos Thunder Method! The Void War Halberd! The Immortal Eternal Seal... Skills are constantly integrated into Tang Rui's mind. In Tang Rui's opinion, these skills are all very good, but they do not have much effect on the improvement of Tang Rui's current strength. woc, wanquanmeipiqi This time the content of the card opened made Tang Rui, who was a little discouraged, suddenly overjoyed. "Eternal Seal!" The tenth skill, I finally pasted it!

Damn, what's going on with my water? I still want a monthly pass.

Brother, I have read this book now. What feeling does it give me? Bosses are constantly appearing and being pushed by the protagonist. No matter how awesome you are, there are only two words: "stick" and "reject". No more. I feel that no matter how much you write, you only have these two words. There is a theme. There are no monsters to fight, so I create difficulties for the protagonist to fight. There is no clear explanation of the framework of the entire plot world. It is a bit boring to read. I am sorry to tell you my thoughts on reading this book before I leave. I hope it will be helpful to you.

This book is still the same old routine, with pretentiousness and slaps in the face, the villain is outwitting, and the key routines are blunt and awkward. I thought the book by the great master had bright spots, but in the end I couldn't see anything consistent with the great master.

There are too many poisonous points, and now it is no longer the world of Xiaobai Shuangwen. Is it okay for the author to write like this? It's a pity that the very interesting system settings were completely destroyed. Logic, IQ, plot foreshadowing, and plot advancement. There are too many flaws.

I have read Chapter 107 of the book, and I found it quite interesting at the beginning and Chapter 50, and the ideas were quite novel. But the book felt like it had lost its soul starting from chapter 80. The protagonist just keeps using other people's skills, and then goes up to fight hard. The protagonist has a lot of skills but has never used them very much. In other words, the protagonist has no team-fighting mentality. He only wants to conquer the world by himself, save the world, and then show off. Regarding alchemy, it's an example. I feel like I have to let the protagonist know how to do it. Returning to the Valley of the Immortal, he obviously had the ability to compete with the Tree Shepherd for control of the plants, but he just wanted to do nothing and watch his teammates get kicked out. There is also the blessing of the gods. It's not like you don't have the ability to destroy the potion, so you just force your opponent to drink it, force it to increase the difficulty, and force it to show off. It is also said that the king is powerful and has status. That Sword of Dawn just told the king that I will come back to trouble you. Even if he was a king, he would be destroyed. Also, the matter of grabbing resources is all nonsense. Your main city is gone. Those are the people who come to collect money to make a living, and they are planning to take all the resources. Who gave them the courage? In short, from the beginning of the novel to now, I feel that the author's writing ideas and overall concepts are constantly declining, and the quality of the 100-chapter novel has seriously declined.

When I saw the fight against the sea tribe, I really felt like I was dizzy and scribbling. I couldn't imagine that people could only survive in the water. How could a sea monster tens of thousands of feet need a city? There was no setting for transforming into a human form. All the scenes were unimaginable. I really don't know what the author was thinking. It was originally a novel, and there was no need for it. It needs to be realistic and reasonable, but at least you have to rationalize it in the novel. Now you are alone in the water, face to face with a group of things that are often tens of thousands of feet tall. It is like an ant facing an elephant. I don't know how to fight. Do you have any moves to fight back? There is still water all around. I am dizzy.

What you wrote later is really amazing, 5 is not as high quality as 2. No more chasing.

I don't even want to give a thumbs up

Human beings have been forced to live underground, and they are still fighting among themselves. If I said it was just a small friction before, forget it, let's take a look at what the hell is going on in the past two days, are the aristocratic families shamelessly grabbing resources? Are the small actions of the noble family on the road to invincibility clearly intended to destroy a future supreme? Are those aristocratic families fools? The human race is about to be exterminated and you are still engaging in mischief. Don't you think it's unpleasant that the human race is being exterminated? Also, it is best to control the number of human kings and above, and it is best to control the number of supremes within 5. After all, the human race is set to be the weak side. It will be funny if there are hundreds of kings and dozens of supremes.

How did you get 500,000 recommendation votes? It's written like an assembly line! No sense of immersion at all!

The first part is okay, but the second part is a routine article. In addition to pretending to be a slap in the face, it is still pretending to be a slap in the face. It must have collapsed and there is nothing left to write.

Boy, this place is not something you can know about at your level, but your reward is here, so I will let you see it. " The Sword King in Black glanced at the surrounding environment, and something strange flashed in his eyes. Tang Rui did not speak. At this time, for him, no matter where it is, just follow the Sword King in Black. "Do you know where this place is? "The sword king in black turned his head and suddenly asked Tang Rui... It's very strange, this author has been in this situation many times. It's inconsistent!

Have you ever seen a male protagonist with such a white lotus? It's too noisy, and you still think it will be better later. Are you sure this is not a novel about the heroine's golden finger and white lotus? **It's a waste of money.

How boring is the author? He didn't hurry up and update the code when he had time to refine it 😤

Hu Niu! Hu Niu! Hu Niu! Hu Niu!

As the title states, good-looking skins are all the same, but interesting souls can be chosen from thousands. Interesting souls are welcome to come and discuss your opinions.

The new book has just launched. I hope all book friends can support Mao. To thank all my friends for their support. Let's build a supplementary building. Friends who are interested can reply in the reply thread. The format of the actor is as follows (the format is incorrect and will not be accepted!) Name: 2. The higher the fan value, the greater the chance of being adopted. Hope you understand. 3. The more detailed the description, the greater the chance of being accepted. The selection is random and may not always be available. The most important thing is that the name must be normal, and any non-mainstream or weird names should be ignored.

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The reward is 10,000, I hope it will be greatly increased.