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I just finished reading the introduction (preface). The background of your story is explained in the introduction, and some ancient history (popular science) is also explained in the introduction. I don't know if this is a good thing, but I think it's a bit awkward, because the introduction takes up a lot of space, and even overwhelms the three golden chapters. This kind of chapter arrangement is a bit discouraging. Everything else is fine, and the portrayal of some characters is also good. I just recommend adding some psychological activities, whether it is a child or a big boss. By the way, there is also the main plot. In the introduction of your work, you seem to have written some clues to the main plot, but it is not clear yet. I have read very few books from the Great Recession, so I will only talk about these. (Don't read too much, it's mainly your layout that makes me feel weird. The rest are great. Come on, you will become a god one day) Looking forward to revisiting "Liu Er Fu Sheng", thank you.

Keep updating every day and don't stop updating! Write well in the future⊙∀⊙!

I like it so much. . . Please keep reading. I will refill the pen to the end! ! Come on Oli ^O^

Not bad, not bad, I'm a fan 🤭

It's well written, follow it to the end and you must work hard!

How should I put it? This article is not a prehistoric period in the general sense, but I want to write a story about the prehistoric period. I don't know how to write it well, so I can only fumble and write it. I hope you readers will bear with me!

Come on, this is your first time writing very well.