Demi-Humans in Konoha Ninja Village

Don't stop updating. Keep up the good work. Starting from today, I'll get two tickets a day. As long as I don't get tired of seeing it, I'll order it all.

Why do you say you are stupid? Your reason is that not everyone is familiar with the plot of Naruto. The problem is that if you are not interested in Naruto, you will not read this book. For those who are interested, even if you haven't read the original anime and manga, everyone who reads the plot and the like knows pretty much the same. It would be fine if the plot you write is about some points that no one usually pays attention to. What you write is really the plot of the original novel. Writing these is not as good as writing about how the protagonist exercises and comes up with new skills. Why not write about some daily life of getting along with each other? The plot of the original novel does not play a role in promoting the development of the plot of your novel. There is no in-depth description of the characters, no laughs, and no excellent quotes. Sometimes a chapter is basically like this. Can you not dislike water? There are no new plots to be deduced, and there are no interesting daily routines. I reluctantly accept the cp removal, but to be honest, you need to give a reason for this. For example, if you say that the protagonist is Naruto's friend and can help Naruto grow, it's fine. You need to let the people in the novel say it, otherwise the right of interpretation lies with the readers. However, readers who are not written in the book can and will over-interpret it, and some people will be too lazy to interpret it. When your writing skills or popularity are insufficient, don't make such meaningless foreshadowing, or think that readers can understand it. There are still ideas, but the writing is not good, and there is still room for improvement.

Squeezing Sasuke out of Class 7 was a huge change and not easy to write about. It's better to form a class with others by yourself. You can play it casually without affecting the main line.

In the class, even if he kicked Sakura, he would not kick Sasuke. First of all, Naruto is the son of the fourth generation and has the Nine-Tails in his body, which needs to be suppressed by Kakashi's Sharingan. Then Sasuke is the last orphan of the Uchiha clan. Only Kakashi in Konoha who still has the Sharingan can teach him. Then, Kakashi's former teammate was an Uchiha. As for Sakura, apart from Naruto liking her, she is indeed talented. Do you really believe in the anime that good grades lead to bad grades? There is also a deep meaning in the teacher's guidance of students. The Hokage lineage, Ino Shikacho, and Asuma's are the third generation to pave the way. They basically don't need to teach. They have family secrets. Kurenai is in charge of reconnaissance, and Akai's is the taijutsu class, so the placement is not random. Not only must you choose the right team, but the teacher can't make mistakes. Tsk, good grades and bad grades are just an excuse. No matter what, Sasuke and Naruto must be in the same class, because at that time, the understanding was that only the Sharingan can suppress tailed beasts.

It's poisonous. Not to mention that the shadow clone can use the Eight Gate Dungeon. The shadow clone can also use ninjutsu in the Eight Gate Dungeon state. This poisonous point is too big.

To be honest, pushing Sasuke out of Class 7 is unreasonable. Why did Kishimoto let Sasuke and Naruto be together at that time? It was because Kakashi could teach Sasuke how to use the Sharingan, and it was because there were few people in Konoha who could suppress Naruto. Sakura was dispensable, but Naruto wanted him to have a sense of belonging. As for the performance ranking, it was pure nonsense. And with the protagonist as a good friend, he can completely replace Sakura's position, so it is unreasonable for Sasuke to leave.

What the protagonist is afraid of is the sealing technique. The sealing technique can be said to be the bug ninjutsu in Naruto. No matter how strong you are, you can be sealed with the sealing technique.

I saved up for several days and finished reading it in one go. It was so enjoyable.

Pain's hell realm extracts people's souls and can kill the protagonist, right?

Zuozhe Shi Lezhi, for Konoha, Sasuke and Naruto are in the same group. The Hokage faction is a powerful and absolutely trustworthy person, and the only one who can stop Naruto from going berserk is Kakashi. Haruno Sakura can be in the seventh team simply because Naruto likes Sakura. Rather than being number one in grade, those were used by Iruka to deceive Naruto

It mainly depends on the author's writing skills. If his writing skills are good, he can write about dismantling CPs or putting out fires and massacring villages.

The protagonist's clone plug-in. In the original work, when Naruto and Pain fought, he used the shadow clone to continue to absorb the natural chakra. When the main body left the sage mode, he summoned a clone in the sage mode through psychic techniques and merged into the main body. At this time The main body continues the sage mode, that is, the excess chakra will be returned to the main body after the clone is released. After the death of the protagonist, the clone is 0.5. The protagonist can create 300 clones, which means the protagonist can obtain 150 times the chakra of himself. Other people's chakra squeezes the body, but the protagonist feeds the body back. As the body becomes stronger, it will have the opportunity to refine more chakra.

dd, I think it's okay, as long as there is no short-term invincibility in the future. . .

Breaking out of your own sky It is impossible to break out of your own sky because Orochimaru has already taken a liking to your body. 😍

There are very few people who write about Asians. Don't be too superficial. We all know the plot. Just hurry up. Don't talk about climbing trees and treading water. I'll give you a reward if you sign a contract.

It's good to take it apart. What's the meaning of the old original work?

Come on, author! Very well written! The update is just too slow! ! ! A thousand people, a thousand Hamlets; Kicking Sasuke is good. In the story of Naruto itself, it feels like Naruto is chasing Sasuke and making various sacrifices for him from beginning to end. After reading your book, I finally don't have to worry about this plot. Just let the pretentious two-pillars fend for themselves!

It's just that his ability is more restrained than Orochimaru's, and he may not necessarily have such an advantage against others.

I don't know why the title of the book immediately made my mind think: the protagonist's identity as a demi-human was exposed, and he was sliced ​​and studied by Danzo Orochimaru. He finally escaped and became stronger before being killed again.