The God Yage

It's so embarrassing, I can't understand it

It's been a while since I started following Process Destroyer intermittently. I beg you to finish writing a book.

Is this entering the palace?

I, Jaeger, just want it. . . . Sorry, I went to the wrong place

Can the author please evolve into a beast? One update a day will save your hair, and one update a day will extend your life by ten years.

Um, I'm so bored watching it, I don't have any sense of involvement at all.

I feel that the setting is okay, but there is not much sense of expectation and interest, and there is a lack of character interaction... You must know that the most important thing in a novel is the characters! Now it feels like just playing games, which is very boring.

Actually, your book is pretty good, but the biggest problem is the sense of immersion. . . To be honest, you can learn from the book Lord of the Abyss, which is the most classic starting mode, and the writing style is very good, and the sense of immersion is super strong. The Dark Moon God and the Black Tide are so low at the beginning, and the protagonist has no sense of existence. In general, the writing style is okay, but the concept and settings are taken very much for granted.

Yeah big head? Is that you, Datou?

Please be a human being and finish writing a book carefully, don't be a eunuch