Everything Is Simple

As an ordinary member, I think this book may be a hit. (Funny)

The details and the handling of the story line are not very well done. Pay attention to some characters and settings, and pay attention to some words, actions, items, etc. That overlap with the settings of the novel. When writing, don't use too many of the same words. Also, the number of words in each chapter is a little more.

You wrote it very carefully, keep up the good work

Nice. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

The writing is not bad, and the beginning also creates conflicts, which is quite in line with the mainstream. However, you need to pay attention to the paragraphing. In some places, for example, when a certain person speaks a long paragraph, you put the large paragraph into one paragraph for the sake of continuity. This makes the paragraph very long and bloated. Readers will not read a paragraph that is too long. We are not experts, so even if it is a conversation from the same person, you can divide it into two or three paragraphs 😁

It's nice, but the number of words is too few.

Can you please add some more updates? It's a bit slow!

If you have any opinions, please share them 😌

When I woke up, I saw someone investing. I was so happy 😄😄😄

Something happened recently, so I'll stop updating for a few days. I'm sorry.