Ruyi Sword Immortal

Bring your own jade pendant when you appear? What, you said that the jade pendant is still making soy sauce after chapter 300? The old man will appear within ten chapters? What, you said that grandpa is actually a rookie? Somewhat interesting. White and black little lolita, the story of a little tadpole looking for her mother... Interesting, interesting. This is how I feel about this novel. When I first read it, I thought it was very cliche, and there was nothing new about it. It was no different from other cultivation novels. But it's actually not routine at all. As long as you have the patience to read on, the subsequent plot will be like a trickle, becoming more interesting and fascinating as you watch. ❤After reading this book for so long, I have never written a serious book review. It is really a sin. ❤ Originally I didn't read much on Qidian. This book was recommended to me by a good friend of mine. He said it was good, so I downloaded the Qidian APP. ❤When I first started watching it, I felt it was really boring. The jade pendant and the old man were all very cliche, but after watching it, I actually found it very interesting. What's more, the things that seemed cliche were actually not cliche at all and were very innovative. ❤The author is really diligent and has been updating diligently. He will also ask for leave in advance when updates are interrupted. ❤Come on, author!

The author's writing style is the kind that needs to be read slowly. It is very similar to ordinary people. The plot description is delicate and very good. In time, it will become a god.

In the Xianxia category, my favorite is Ru Huan's writing style. Now the Xianxia category has been confused by some messy articles. Ru Huan must write according to his own style. Xianxia articles only get good results if they have a large number of words. According to your current trend, there is no problem. I haven't read the book yet. I have been busy recently. When I stabilize here, I will read it carefully. Come on, come on, wait for the gods [laughs]

After reading almost 150 chapters, I found that the author wrote a paragraph in each paragraph. Although there is no problem with this, if a paragraph is very long, the segment will be very large. Although it seems to occupy one or two rows on the computer, if the computer screen is large, it will not fit in one row. But it is very uncomfortable for mobile readers. When I first started watching it, I was really not used to it, because a paragraph was too long and took up almost half of the screen. It means you don't have to take a break while reading this passage, because as soon as you take a break, you won't know where you are looking, which will be very uncomfortable. In fact, paragraphs can be divided into clauses one by one, so that both the computer version and the mobile version will look very clean and tidy. Otherwise, it's really hard to see the points for one large section after another. I'd also like to pay more attention to improving them😁😁😁

As the plot unfolded and the protagonist grew up, I suddenly felt a little reluctant because those warm days were gone. The cruel world opens up to the protagonist bit by bit. Now we have the protection of our masters and elders, what about in the future? When the protagonist becomes stronger and stronger and their cultivation level can no longer keep up with the protagonist, the protagonist can only bear all this by himself. Imagining the subsequent plot, I couldn't help but feel a little worried and proud. Worrying about the protagonist's comfort, I am proud that the protagonist will always grow into a generation of female geniuses! In short, cheers, author!

It's so difficult to have no cp and no male protagonist. I just want to avoid thunder and I often get scolded. I just want to know in advance whether there is cp or not. When I saw the introduction, I directly introduced no cp and no male protagonist. It was so surprising. I must add it to my collection. It's too difficult for me 😭😭

I'm stupid. Readers who abandon the article don't need to send more than a dozen comments to tell me that you abandoned the article, because I won't be able to send you off with gongs and drums. The performance of this novel has always been poor among all my achievements. It is a subject matter that I am not good at at all, so it is very popular and has no income at all. It is purely for love. Of course, this is normal. A lot of the content in the early stage is quite outrageous, but it is impossible to change it. How can I change it at any time after two million words? It's still the kind of thing where there is no income. Why do I still keep writing? If it weren't for the few readers who still support me and want to write a complete story so that readers who still like this story can at least read a complete story that I tried my best, I would have given up long ago.

After reading about 10 chapters, I felt that the sect was a bit poisonous to me. After all, they are all sects of cultivating immortals. They are all in their fifties, sixties, seventies or eighties, but the result is like a child's vindictiveness and a shrew's swearing. Even ordinary people, after living for so many years, will not understand the world at all.

I've read Chapter 110. It's very well written. Everything about the writing is very good, especially the human relationships, which are flesh-and-blood. Sometimes my eyes burst into tears when I read it, and some made my stomach hurt from laughing. The writing is very good. Come on😊! ! ! !

The author's wife should pay no attention to those trolls, she is also a boring person.

Take care of yourself and go to bed early every day

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I just like reading novels without cp! Like 😘

When I read Chapter 5, although the author's writing style is a bit immature, it is full of childlike interest. I wonder if this interest will be lost when the writing style matures. Moreover, the length of each chapter is so conscientious.

Gong Tingyu made me feel so uncomfortable, I just collapsed. .

I haven't read much, but in Chapter 6, even a master like Bailijian was criticized as rubbish. I was really convinced.

Hehe, I came here when I heard there was no male lead. Great support, keep updating! (=^▽^=)

After reading Chapter 15, I feel okay. At least the feeling that the small sect has a lot of shit is written out (face covering)

The updated update is equal to that of the heroine. I would like to mention that the blood-stained character and the character of the heroine are not integrated with each other. The only time she went on a killing spree was when she was in a state of dementia. I suggest writing more about the heroine's decisive killing side to temper her temperament. The latest chapter looks very strange. The heroine does not kill, but Cangjian insists that it must be watered with blood. You said it is understandable if the sword is thirsty for drinking blood, but what does it mean that a swordsmanship requires blood to be watered? Isn't it a swordsmanship without blood? Wait for the next article.

The author's writing style is very good. Yingxue's childhood separated from life in a small village a little quickly. The relationship between her mother and her was treated very superficially, which is a pity. My heart is so good that I don't want my girl to suffer. Then he met the noble man, so it was a bit sudden. The author has lived in the countryside for no more than ten years, and he has never caught the melancholy in the blood of people when they leave the familiar land. These are all structures that need to be considered more. The problem is not big. The heroine should be pampered a little. Don't forget to write about the emotional and personality changes of the girl from childhood to adulthood, and reconcile the contradiction between innocence and violence in her character. Revenge should be played down as much as possible. Mutual fans of my humble work "No More Regrets YF"~~

Read it in one go, waiting for updates...

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😘😘I invested ~ Come on (´-ω-`)

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