The White Angel of Darkness in the Six Realms

I have made some modifications to the paragraphs, and they will all be modified within today. I just ask everyone to stick with it and read on.

The cover is nice and there are more people.

Finally the first comment came. Thank you very much for your suggestion. I am an engineering student and I have never written anything. I have no choice in terms of writing. This novel is my hard work. I want to write it how I want it to be. To be honest, I don't like the style of a paragraph with only a few sentences, but I will try my best to divide it into more paragraphs in the future. Thank you very much for leaving without reading the first chapter.

I pushed it for you, but no one came.

In fact, I really don't know how to describe, I can only use some of the simplest writing methods. Moreover, I have finished writing the manuscript of this work, but I have not finished typing the electronic version.

I will invest in you as soon as my account reaches level three.

It also comes from the signature of a certain music game. Looking at it now, I think the biggest difficulty is that there are so many organizations, so many names, and so many subordinates from all walks of life. If you don't read it continuously, you will be confused, and if you read it continuously, you will not remember it. The strange thing is that an organization as well introduced as Dark City only has these few members, which feels weird. I personally think it would be nice to have more ordinary members besides the core members. In addition, I feel that the initial setting of the male protagonist is a bit redundant. It is true that the status of a genius has brought jealous motives to some miscellaneous fish, but after that, the exam also came second, and there was no more one in the harem. Instead, the female characters were all attached to Ye Qu. In addition, I imagined the scene of the Japanese dubbing animation surprisingly smoothly. Are there some elements of Japanese light novels? For example, a high school student who has awakened the power of transcendence and still goes to school obediently, a beautiful girl who unfamiliarly calls others "xx classmate" (san), and a little x (x-chan) as a pet name. I feel that the more localized element is that I study late at night, and the male protagonist basically doesn't go there, which is sad.

Here's another suggestion. You have too many "talks". How about adding more descriptions? For example, "..." Xxx spread his hands. He was also desperate, but what could he do? Instead of "..." Xxx said

I'm just curious as to why the game is still being signed and promoted after so long. . I kept seeing it, so I came here to take a look and make some random comments. At first glance, after reading dozens of chapters, I thought it was nothing more than that (it may be because I am used to reading long novels with more than a thousand chapters, but such a short length gave me a feeling that I was not paying for the manuscript but just for self-pleasure. Although the proportion of dialogue is a bit high, the writing is better than many mixed-signed flutters). After a rough browsing, I should have finished telling the most basic story. Also, he said that he hasn't seen the second season yet, has it been blocked?