Peregrine Falcon 1937

I have to start work again tomorrow. My daily wage is calculated by steps, one cent per step. I walk about 20,000 to 30,000 steps a day, and it's a 10-hour workday. I'm terrible at typing, and seeing other authors write over 10,000 words a day really makes me want to kneel down in awe. I can only manage a maximum of 6,000 words a day, and that's after working more than ten hours.

The protagonist seems to have no idea what leadership is.

This name is interesting and fits the theme well. Keep it up!

The article is good, but the updates are lacking.

The Presidential Office was established, and Chiang Kai-shek was advised to amend the Constitution of the Republic of China so that the positions of Premier and Vice Premier would not require approval from the Legislative Yuan.

The Military Intelligence Bureau needs to establish a research and development planning department to secretly tender for equipment development.

Can you even write about the Ming Dynasty? 🤐

This protagonist does everything himself; he's lucky he survived a month behind enemy lines—it's a miracle he even survived. Now, there are probably hundreds, if not thousands, of people who knew he was involved in the anti-Japanese resistance. Even the Japanese, if they were pigs, would have found him.

Honestly, if you're writing a story with a single female lead, don't drag in so many other women. If you're writing a story with multiple female leads, don't include anything like siblings. If you're not writing a story with a female lead at all, just be cold and ruthless... Otherwise, it's really disgusting.

Keep it up! Waiting for the contract to be signed and the book to be released.