PlayerUnknown’s Battlegrounds: The Demon King System

The book was ruined at the beginning of Chapter 295. The anchor was rewarded hundreds of millions and went home for fear of being beaten to death. It's so funny!

Come on, if you can hold on until it's on the shelves, I'll give you a reward

Is your profile serious? I used two 98Ks against professional players. Are you sure you have played this game? Or are you here to make fun of me?

Someone else fires one shot, but you speed up the game time and fire two shots? If the sound is wrong, I will report it to you.

A world-class anchor competes with a girl with three skills who is nothing like you? Do you really have no sense of national honor? At the beginning of the offline competition, they said that cc's attitude was not correct and they just wanted to give the boss a chicken. Even if the international competition is just a host competition, you should treat it carefully and do your best to win. After all, if you lose, people will always add the word "China" to you. I really can't accept this. So what if you win the championship in the end? I hope this book will be sealed because of your indifference to national honor. Although it is said that you should not bring reality into reality when reading novels, who doesn't read Shuangwen to seek spiritual nourishment by putting the protagonist's experiences into reality? It is necessary to be politically correct in basic matters of right and wrong. A Douyu All-Star wrote more than 200 chapters, you wrote nearly 200 chapters for the Cologne Invitational Qualifying Tournament, and you wrote over 200 chapters for the Cologne Tournament, but the main game just started? I am convinced by this rhythm! ! !

The one who created the world, do you understand? 😏

Nowadays, most chicken novels have this kind of forced slap in the face routine. I've seen enough. Is there a real book about games?

Damn it, it was written in a parallel world. Are you, a game anchor, ignoring the laws of the country by opening a harem in the city?

Author, there is a certain reason why the performance of your book is not very satisfactory. It is really slow in pace. You mentioned before that the writing is delicate, but it can be seen in many places in the book that it is really slow, and it is not a matter of subtlety. For example, you can write more than ten chapters on a small detail before a game, and you can basically write twenty chapters on a single game. Five to thirty chapters is really not necessary. Generally speaking, you write about fifteen chapters for a game. I think it is quite reasonable. Your current pace is a bit too slow, giving people the feeling of a dog pulling a sheep's intestines. Like the Cologne game I saw now, during the game, you also have to intersperse domestic live broadcasts.It's country's commentary desk has nothing to do with the description of professional teams, and every point is basically the rhythm of at least one chapter. It's really a bit ridiculous and very boring for readers. After all, you should follow some basic writing principles when writing a book. When writing essays in the past, you should also have a detailed outline. You write down every day, including every meal, which is really like keeping a running account. This is just my personal suggestion to you, the author, and has no other meaning. If you feel that you can still read it, author, I hope you will adopt it. I also hope that you can write this book well. After all, except for the plot of this book, which is too procrastinating and a bit confusing, I feel that other writing aspects are quite good.

It's a bit awesome. The author of the good suggestions comments deleted them, but the comments that criticized the author were kept. A bit of a show, a group of people who were persuaded to quit.