My Elf Super Water

The full version of the test paper for Chapter 14 of this book 1. The joke is not nonsense, adaptation—— A is not made up randomly, B cannot be made up randomly, C can be made up at will, and D can only be made up by me. 2. The big movie "Where's Captain Monkey?" Belongs to—— A is a China-Bulgaria co-production, B is a China-US co-production, C was not filmed at all, and D was filmed over and over again. 3. The big movie "Where's Captain Monkey?" Will be officially launched - A at the beginning of next year, B will not be filmed, C in the first half of this year, D in the second half of this year. 4. Which of the following Pokémon plays the role of the squirrel in the Dragon Ball theme song: A. Coconut monkey, B. Explosive monkey, C. Cold water monkey, D. Flame monkey. 5. The international chapter refers to—— A Octopus Bucket, B Goldfish King, C Reshiram, D Select all. 6. The act of promoting one's movie in the Ghost Tower of Ziyuan Town is called—— A urban legend, B hunger marketing, C selling movies in mourning halls, D cold rice is delicious. 7. Which of the following is the throwing posture of an international superstar? - A. Master, let's go! B. Tactical leaning back, C. Dreamy footsteps, D. Walking on the Golden Avenue. 8. As a qualified six-study trainer, my adventure time was from the age of 28 to him——, I know him too well. A, 38 years old, B, 18 years old, C, 82 years old, D passed away. 9. ———, Carry forward Chinese culture. A, two literary flowers bloom, B, two literary flowers bloom, C, two literary flowers bloom, D two literary flowers bloom. 10. The most serious warning is,———— A, reread warning, B, lawyer's letter warning, C, real fragrance warning, D, apology warning.

[+1] On January 24th, I successfully joined Feng Zimo's book list. Feng Zimo is the author of "Pokemon: The Strongest NPC" 🤓.

Your introduction is to apologize to the people of the whole country.

Overall Rating: 74 Theme: Male Channel·Light Novel Number of words read: 10w+/61w+ Commentator: Nai Ganyujunjue 1. Introduction to the book title (14/20) b> Title of the book (6.5/10) It's about elves. Super water is an attribute, not a complaint. Although it seems a bit fun, after reading it, I found that apart from the setting of taking a super water elf on an adventure, and the role is not high, it may leave a lot of foreshadowing in the plot, but overall there are no obvious highlights. Introduction (7.5/10) The jokes are timely, which is a flaw. Secondly, it can be seen that it is a sincere elf text, and it is still the latest plot and setting. Although the introduction tries to be fun, the expression effect is not good. It does not really show the characteristics of the work, but more of an adventure experience based on the plot and Pokémon world view. 2. Writing (15.5/20) What impressed me most about the whole text was the high degree of restoration of the plot and character dialogue. The previous one was about restoring the animation, while this one is trying to restore the Nintendo Pokémon series. Including battle mode, system prompts, and many game modes, reading is very familiar to Pokémon players. The skills of the full text are used in dialogue, plot, and restoration of some scenes to achieve the effect of paying homage to the original work. Although there are jokes in some places, compared to the content of the jokes, the description of the entire grand Pokémon world and the restoration of the lines of many characters are the highlights of this book. Some of them are jokes, similar to the Six Learnings. After that period of time, the effectiveness is lost when you look back. Perhaps because of the censorship attitude, you start to feel that there is something wrong. The writing is still relatively free, and sometimes many time-sensitive memes or elements are added. Another highlight is that it strives to depict a touching plot. It has spent a lot of pen and ink on this. I believe true fans will also be moved. It's just that for casual fans, the reading threshold of this book is relatively high. After all, there have been more than eight generations of Pokémon, and there are not many readers who can persevere. It is more of a childhood memory of the previous generations. So from this point of view, the author's selection of materials may have a smaller audience than ordinary Pokémon articles, but the ones that can stand the test are the loyal fans who follow up in real time. The combat description is limited by the game, so the visual sense is missing a lot. And the battle ended quickly, with less waves. 3. Beginning (13.5/20) The threshold is a bit high at the beginning. There are many advanced theories and noble scientific and technological models, which makes reading a bit sluggish. Although the setting is complete, the reading threshold is a bit high. But the plot required to unfold can be vaguely understood. Doujinsheng's world view is based on the understanding of the original work, so for me, a casual fan who only has half a foot in black and white, my understanding of black and white has basically dropped a lot. This is one of the reasons why the latest articles are confusing to most readers. Secondly, the expansion of the journey is a bit slow. In order to round the setting or fit the game mode of the simulator, the interaction with the elves has been greatly weakened. This will cause some readers to lose interest. Then, the golden finger at the beginning is a bit satisfying, but the fixed setting of five super water also limits other readers' needs for collecting Pokémon. Although the title of the book states that one super water type is mainly used, it is true that there are too few ways for Pokémon to appear as living creatures rather than combat tools. Although the intimacy system was added later, the game mode is basically based on player experience and NPC communication, and the status of Pokémon, or Pokémon training, growth, or communication, is not high enough as the focus of the full text. This is different from other Pokémon stories, and it is also the difference between true fans and casual fans. The author restores the game progress and plot related to the entire Pokémon world, which is a tribute to various characters. Being able to express the special personality charm of all characters is also a quite alternative way of fandom. This is the reason I speculated that it was difficult to sign the contract at the beginning. The focus is a bit biased against the needs of public readers. This is a quite niche and quite true fan of Pokémon. But the advantage is that players who have played the game can understand and appreciate the mode of game play, and can only continue reading after passing this mental hurdle. 4. Plot settings (14.5/20) 1. The settings of the Pokémon world will not be shown for the time being. Here, after restoration, the game is used to simulate life, and the writing is still a strong gaming experience. (For example, the battle is pseudo-turn-based, and system prompts in the game will appear from time to time.) This mode has mixed advantages and disadvantages. It is a bit like a game and has a sense of experience. The disadvantage is that it limits your own space for play. Turn-based combat, and the characters follow the set plot dialogue. It is not as flexible as other elf novels. In order to follow the game system, there is a lot less interaction with the elf. 2. Some places are a bit stiff because they follow the original work or the plot requires it. Example: Liuli actually doesn't have many roles, and her appearance frequency is almost that of a passerby, but because Chu Yue has a crush on her, she becomes the heroine. Even the confession part is actually very naughty, but from a practical point of view, it lacks a lot of highlights and seems a bit useless. For example, in the second gym, Slowpoke's preemptive skill is too simple to win with one move. There are some "plot needs" here, and in terms of level, there seems to be no big difference in the follow-up. 3. The battle scenes are actually a bit erratic. Occasionally, the grand scenes of more than 30 Pokémon are passed by in a flash, and the gym showdown is indeed somewhat interesting. Except that the Pokémon fall really fast, and occasionally it is just a matter of one move, lacking too many waves (the performance here is also limited by the game settings). 5. Overall impression (16.5/20) 1. This is a genuine work of faith. The CP of Pokémon and the true fans of each character weaken the existence of Pokémon, but vividly represent the humans in this world. The game follows many settings, including the breeding house, the subway, the mysterious power creation base, the insect catching conference, and the charm contest and other series of game derivatives. As a player reader, it is a very nostalgic thing. But the experience still needs to be improved. 2. The humanistic atmosphere is very strong. The author follows the original work and even works very hard to express the characters and stories in the original work, depicting famous scenes that moved the sentimental party. There are also many dialogues that although the reality seems very simple, it is set like this in the game. It retains the simplicity and innocence of adult fairy tales. 3. The plot is very tight, and each event is evenly drawn, which makes the rhythm very tight. It's a bit like experiencing the game process yourself, and you have to run straight for various main lines from time to time. 4. Comparing the text before and after, I can see that the recent battles and Pokémon are much more lively, and could be more vivid, and find a more appropriate balance between following the settings and being a fan.

At first glance, it looked like I had too much elfin water. 😰

Already collected, the writing is very good, keep up the good work

Project name: Mushishi fanfiction Project type: short story + two-dimensional light novel Overall project goal: 80,000-100,000 words, 2019-2020 to be determined Project difficulty + project receipt: five-star difficulty + continuous improvement of writing + critical writing practice. Project progress is updated at any time, on a weekly basis.

Different ways to travel and a lot of imagination are great~Support~

Take a chance + work hard to become stronger every day!

I lost everything when I was locked up in a dark room for a million-word novel. But I don't want to lose this copy of "My Elf Super Water" again. I hereby sincerely conduct self-examination. In order to create a harmonious and good online novel creation environment, I will strictly abide by the writing rules, do not brush aside the edges, and do not cross the line. I hope that all readers will supervise me. I don't want to lose you anymore, and I don't want to lose you either 😭

[You said that you have a dream, then go and realize this dream...] This sentence was the last sentence N said to the protagonist in N City. With the end of Pokemon Black and White, it also came to a successful conclusion. As everyone knows, it was this sentence that laid the foundation for players to petition for the official Chinese version of the elf, and even in the future, there would be Chinese 7+2 in Sun and Moon. Standing on the dividing line between the two, would you choose the ideal or the real? Chu Yue has been writing online articles all his life, and he is not even an author. He had the ideal of LV5, but he lost to reality. When he was forcibly transported to the world of Pokémon, he faced the complex reality of adventure in the Unova region, but lost to his ideal of being a carefree Pokémon. There is always a dividing line between the black and white dragons in the mural that cannot be merged. There is the dividing line between ideal and reality, with ideal black on one side and real white on the other. [Yes, I have a dream, we all have dreams, so let's realize this dream.

I uninstalled the Qidian app before to write a thesis, but now I have downloaded it again. I have photos of the author in women's clothing and I would like to send a private message 😌

I clicked in and was shocked by the number of fans. It's amazing.

Congratulations on signing the contract. Come on, give me some cum for everyone to see!

Congratulations on signing the contract, let's set sail and let's work together!

By the way, the protagonist of my novel is also a character like an elf. When I was stuck, I came here to learn from it, and then I could continue writing smoothly, hehe! I'm so smart 🤭 Come on! Let's create brilliance together⊙∀⊙!

Senior, has this book been signed? Why can't I reward you? 😅

I've read less than 20 chapters. The pace is too slow, the author is enjoying himself. Set up a save like a game? What other guy in shorts has a huge fighting ability? It looks fake. Then it's very long-winded. I could write about anything for a long time. The protagonist has been unable to travel for a long time. The elf is dead at the beginning and there is no fun of recovery. There is also a plot where the elf is not obedient. It is very unpleasant to watch. Who has the patience to watch you slowly try to please the elf? No more.

I just discovered that the author's rewards from others are dozens of times more than the rewards this book received.

I would like to take advantage of my great treasure to recommend a newly discovered Pokemom article to all my fans, "The decision is yours, climb to the unknown peak" 👍

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It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

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