Start by Offering Incense at Nuwa Palace

There are so many things, but I really can't fault your writing style. It looks tired, repetitive, and the content is draggy. It's really a bit difficult.

Come on! Come on! ! The writing is beautiful

I generally don't comment, but the discussion about fate in this book is thought-provoking.

Sorry, I was really disgusted by what you wrote about Lei Zhenzi. 147 I have already reported it. 🙂Don't be angry, I didn't spend money to read books to buy your vulgar and vulgar taste.

Nezha is Nuwa's child's spiritual bead. The demon clan Yuanshi Tianzun can fight for it, and the protagonist can also fight for it! Since you want to defy heaven, you shouldn't believe in fate. Otherwise, the protagonist is destined to destroy his country and his family. He still resists. When the protagonist said that he was destined to only have two sons, he was a little speechless. The Lich is a feud. The protagonist's original power is the Wu Clan and the Jiejiao, and the other saint sect is on the other side. Now the protagonist wants to win over the Lich Clan, so he must mediate the relationship between the two clans.

Your big demon king hasn't been updated yet. If you don't tell me more, I can clean it up.

It was okay in the early stages, but became more and more extreme in the later stages, making it unsuitable to watch.

Can the author separate the words spoken by the characters and the narration and thoughts in the mind, and connect them together? It's a bit difficult. I can add symbols before talking to others.

Making trouble? Are you confused after copying and pasting too much? Why are there so many repetitions of 150 to 151?

In fact, it is very simple to deal with Haotian God, Hongjun, and Sanqing. Fill up the list of gods as early as possible. The people on the list must be of high quality and quantity, but the core of the three religions must not fall and be damaged. Therefore, the Twelve Golden Immortals and the True Inheritance of Jiejiao cannot die. Beware of the schemes of people like Lu Ya and Ran Deng. What King Zhou should calm down is Nuwa's anger. This depends on Di Xin's contribution to the human race. Once he has done it, it will be easy to find someone to ask for favors from the Three Saint Emperors of Huoyundong and let the Three Saints convince Nuwa. Don't be misled by the Great Desolate Current. In fact, in Fengshen, Nuwa is not necessarily more powerful than the Three Holy Emperors. There is no such thing as a heavenly saint among the gods. God Haotian should be regarded as the most noble, the most holy, the symbol of heaven, and the incarnation of Tao. Everyone else works for him, and the status of Sanseizhai in Huoyundong is also extremely high.

I suggest giving Yuanshi Tianzun a new title to spread the word to the world. Personally, I think "Yuanshi Tianzun" is good.

"The Sword Comes and Asks", a new novel in the fairy tale genre, has 400,000 words and is ready to be read.        ，       ，……        ，，        ，，，                                                                                                                                                                                            brothers.

Journey to the West is so well written, but it turned out to be a eunuch. I hope this book can be completed and last long enough to become a god.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it. There was nothing else. Even the saints looked like fools. They let the protagonist do whatever he wanted, and he also did things casually. It didn't look like a catastrophe, but more like everyone was playing house with the protagonist.

Come on! (Running from the Demon King) (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Very 6 Although it is a little unreasonable, it is good for the same type.

Just paddle around in the water as you like, anyway, you can become a god even if you die in the end.

It feels well written. Come on, don't give up, I came from the pirate side. No eunuchs. Come over and subscribe for you. You said my heart is not sincere

The author's killing of Empress Jiang should be foreshadowing. Empress Jiang's fate was to be killed by Di Xin. This is a cause and effect, but Di Xin did not want to kill her. Others cannot take her place. If someone else takes her place, it would violate the cause and effect, even if she pretends to be. Cause and effect must be repaid after all. Therefore, when the Qi Practitioner kills Queen Jiang, the cause and effect of King Wu's defeat of Zhou has changed, so it may eventually become King Wu's alliance with Di Xin, so that those Qi Practitioners will be on the list.

Tianya Da Da, please help me promote "Sword Building Eight Wastelands Road". We just need to collect the tickets, thank you.

How Don't dare to kill twenty or thirty of them at once

It's so beautifully written that I accidentally became obsessed with it. Big boost to the author!

Come on, come on, it looks great, keep updating, keep updating, and my mother, hurry up and sign the contract, hurry up and sign the contract.

I thought Nuwa was one of the heroines. . . .

Comment on why this novel is so popular... The main reason is that the author lacks a sense of involvement, and the reader looks like a running account. Maybe the author himself feels that the writing is okay, but after reading the ashes for more than ten years, your novel is not white enough. In other words, the writing style is still a bit poor, and it is at a position where it is neither good nor bad.

What is written in the first chapter? 😡 It doesn't make sense from top to bottom, and it's nonsense.

The crazy person who fills you with water🔨🔨🔨🔨

The eyes flashed and it was Yoyo. . . .

I want to ask, who are the heroines?