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Cabinet author, you posted an article, can you read it yourself? The sentences made no sense and the plot was incoherent, which made me confused.

I think it's best for fantasy novels not to include some more dramatic descriptions, such as Chinese-style names and behavioral habits, and then add some small descriptions about the Middle Ages, and it would be better if the tone has a translation accent (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's written in a primary school student's writing style. It's not clear whether the person named Qadir is a boy or a girl. In the second chapter, "he" is clearly a boy, and he speaks like a man. However, after being rescued, he changed his gender and suddenly became a girl.

Introduction The first question: She is here to be her aunt The second question: The shopkeeper is sleepwalking and hungry The third question: The nuns are on the top of the mountain The fourth question: It thinks it is a bat The fifth question: It feels cold to watch funny jokes

Your book particularly attracts me and I like it very much. The control of the plot and the characterization of the characters are very good. I want to learn from you. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

Come on, just write more times. It has a sense of novelty but the writing is just average. I don't feel like I want to keep reading.

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Can't read? ? ? ?

The author of The Elder Scrolls must be pretty good at playing it.

I guess it's because I didn't explain it well~ There are many omissions that are difficult to understand. You can post here. What can be said will be explained one by one, and what cannot be said will be slowly unfolded in the book~~🤭🤭🤭