Nio Mandala

I haven't read it yet, I'll keep it first😊😊

Only the beginning is interesting. The beginning is very innovative. The princes return and the battle for heirs begins. The protagonist's ability is not particularly outstanding. He wants a better life and his goal is to become one of the fourth sons. It is very difficult but not unachievable. In order to save the people, he did not hesitate to conflict with his brother, which showed his compassion. His fighting method was reasonable and measured, which showed his wisdom, and successfully established the protagonist Wei Guangzheng's image. But what follows is almost all random writing. Martial men, Taoists, and Immortal Lords are mixed together, and the system is in a mess. There is no clear and reasonable world structure setting at all. Wudang, Tai Chi, King of Hanzhong, Yizhou, Xiangqun, Myanmar, and Zhang Liang have too many poisonous points and the names are too inconsistent. The protagonist has nothing to accomplish except for practicing martial arts, and his communication skills are not worthy of praise. As a qualified leader, the ability to select, employ and manage people is even worse. There is almost no selection of people, and employment? A group of foreigners came to surrender, and one group was all male thieves and female prostitutes. In charge of people, the main subordinates are keen on sensuality and sex. This kind of ragtag team has no fighting ability.

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Post a joke! There are four Japanese warriors in the Canyon of Kings. They came to the Canyon of Kings for their respective dreams. Ukyo Tachibana: の! Shiranui Mai: かかってらしゃい! Nako Lulu: ありがとう, MATCH! Because they don't understand Japanese, people stay away from them. There is only one samurai "Let me tell you a secret, I am invincible!" "To be too invincible and not able to find an opponent is also a kind of invincible sadness." "I want to die, line up, come one by one!" Now, Ukyo Tachibana is still his solitary swordsman, Mai Shiranui is still dancing, and Nakoruru and her Mamahaha wander the world. And that samurai... Probably, his head was smashed by a hammer.

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"As grassroots people, we still need to work hard and fight for our ideals." Alas, I am so old and still want to work hard. I am so ashamed. I have forgotten why I have to work hard. My ideals have been fed to dogs, and I have become a useless person unknowingly.

Haha, I just found out that the author is Yun Wuchang

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Yunda's new work - "Walking Corpse, Palace of the Flesh", modern supernatural ghosts, everyone should go see it! ~~

The role of Li Hu shines!

Spring comes so quickly, quietly and unconsciously, the grass turns green, the branches sprout, and the wild flowers and rapeseed flowers bloom everywhere. Everything is bathed in the dawn of spring morning, swaying and swaying in the spring breeze, like a girl singing and dancing, so charming. Creatures wake up in the spring morning, showing the preciousness and attractiveness of life. The spring morning ignites hope in the heart and inspires the passion for life.

As soon as we walked into the orchard, we saw the red apple trees. From a distance, they looked like they were on fire. When we got closer, each apple looked like a little girl's blushing face. When I turned around, I saw the golden pears, which looked like golden gourds. When I smelled it, hey, what does this smell like? Oh, it turned out to be the alluring fragrance of golden pears. Walking further, I saw orange lanterns hanging on the persimmon trees. When I touched them, they were soft and must be delicious. Turning around, I saw red and round cherries, really like rubies. I picked one and tasted it, ah! It's so sour! Inadvertently, I glanced at the ground and saw groups of ants preparing food for the winter.

It was not yet sunrise and the sky was just a little bright; it was a wonderful and vast moment. There are still a few stars scattered in the deep white sky. The ground is dark and the sky is completely white. The weeds are trembling slightly, and everything is shrouded in mysterious light. A skylark seems to have joined the stars, singing in the extremely high sky, and the vast sky seems to be holding its breath to listen to the carols sung by this little life for the boundless universe. In the east, the Grass Mountain Col reflects the bronze sky, showing its black shadow; the dazzling white star is hanging on the top of the hill, like a soul flying out of this dark mountain field.

Spring is here, and all kinds of gorgeous flowers are in bloom, all so gorgeous and eye-catching. The oilseed crops planted by the farmer uncle in the field - rapeseed flowers are also blooming. The golden rapeseed flowers have become a paradise for butterflies. Beautiful butterflies dance softly and gracefully on the golden stage. They are flying in the air for a while, and staying quietly on the rapeseed flowers for a while. It is this that adds a lot of fun to spring. The beauty of rapeseed flowers also attracts many "working people" - bees. Bees always work tirelessly to pollinate the rapeseed flowers day and night. Occasionally, a breeze blows, and the golden rapeseed flowers immediately surge into undulating "golden waves". Looking from a distance, it is really beautiful!

There are some ink in the plot advancement, the big scenes are uncontrollable, the characters are always bickering endlessly, and the jade bottle keeps jiggling, making Princess Xiao seem to have disappeared and become mute. Xiao Rui became a chatterbox and kept talking. This problem in Yunda is very serious. Although it is an old work, the common problems are always there. There are too many miscellaneous female characters. Their appearance is just a name. There are many such as Li Rujiyun that there is no need to write. There are also Biyue and Ziyun in The Immortal, which seem very vague to people. In fact, just writing one is enough.

The increasing heat of the sun rejuvenates the earth. Spring is like a beautiful fairy in a fairy tale. It leaps from the ocean to Hainan Island, and then from Hainan Island to the southern tip of the mainland, delivering the news of spring all the way north. Wherever she went, the ice and snow melted, trees sprouted, flowers bloomed, and hibernating animals opened their sleepy eyes and woke up. Although it is a long journey from south to north, from Leizhou Peninsula to the Heilongjiang River Basin, this beautiful fairy would have to travel for five or six months. However, by the beginning of spring, she had already crossed Guangzhou and headed north. The road she walked on immediately turned into a colorful road, with light yellow, tender green, colorful purple and delicate red, and the leaves and flowers were full of life. Those bell-shaped flowers, like bell flowers, seem to be making subtle sounds, laughing indulgently like wild little girls: "Spring is here! Spring is here!"

How did you get the two medal achievements of reaching a higher level and breaking out into the official chapter when you didn't sign a contract?

Gold will always shine, come on Yun Da. I have been silently following your works for more than ten years, and I hope you can write for another twenty years👍👍👍