Taking My Employees on the Path to Immortality
带着员工去修仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 105k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 7y ago
- English
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Synopsis
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51Chapters
471Recommendations
1Fans
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Reader comments 9
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I think the author needs to take their work more seriously. All your novels have a major weakness: the characters are incredibly vague, their emotions and expressions are completely indistinguishable… The details and nuances are handled very immaturely. Your previous novel, with its 500 chapters, was basically all bland and uneventful, lacking any climaxes or exciting moments.
The author has a tendency to look down on women, and the beautiful women in the story are all materialistic and lack intelligence.
Do you think this book has potential?
The content of the book is readable, but the title is poorly chosen; I was deterred from reading it several times by the title.
Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง
Does the author want us to give them recommendation tickets and monthly passes for their new book?
This is from an old book; is this going to be published in two parts?
Read more of other people's works and learn from them. Another book has the same problem; it's okay in the beginning, but it gets a bit unrealistic towards the end, and the characters become too unrealistic. Also, perhaps your characters are expressing too much of their own thoughts?
The characters in the dialogue are not very relatable.