I'm Back from Outside the Territory

The plot is good! The structure is clear. It's just that the characters of the supporting characters are too distinct, and not many people's inner world is shown on their faces. They are sinister, cunning, vicious, and smiling! Hypocrite, what a villain. There are many such talents. Moreover, most people who practice martial arts are tough inside and not so fragile! Looking at Hong Kong's classic martial arts movies, the supporting actors are often talented and outstanding! Even powerful. The same is true for Hollywood blockbusters. If the supporting characters are overwritten just for the sake of fun, it will become unwatchable! What do you think!

Everyone is welcome to comment. As long as it is a serious analysis, I will read it. Some deficiencies can also be pointed out. If I think it is indeed reasonable, I will refer to it and make corrections. Finally, thank you all and wish you all a happy new year and a new atmosphere.

It's quite good, and the character descriptions are really good, but I hope the author can work hard to design a few highly intelligent villains who are ruthless and secretly ruthless. Finally, I hope I won't write too much about the government. . . . . . Try to touch as little as possible

Why do reborn people talk so much nonsense and say they are in a hurry to find a sister? Do they really die because they talk too much?

In fact, the writing is readable, but the main reason is that the updates are too slow, and one chapter a day is exhausting. A young eunuch wastes his character, it would be better to forget this book

After reading too much urban literature, I understand three truths! The first is that people who come out of the mountains should not be messed with, because they may be experts. People with the second surname Ye cannot be messed with, there may be three young men from wealthy families. Third: It's best not to mess with the farmers, maybe he's a miracle doctor. Fourth: Don't mess with the security guard, maybe it's the King of Soldiers or the King of Killers, which made me take a detour when I saw the security guard. I almost went up and nodded and bowed. Five: The teacher is the worst person to mess with. He may very well use his powers to banish you to a different dimension. Sixth: Also, be sure not to mess with students. Maybe some big shot will be reborn, or he will get superpowers from a chance encounter and then kill you. Seventh, the last and very important point is, don't mess with the school beauties, lolita, and royal sisters. If you mess with these, you will mess with all the above!

I just like to see how many people read The Eunuch after the recommendation list...🤭🤭🤭

It feels like the same old routine, meeting a beautiful woman

The blowing in front was too strong, a bit too poisonous

Come on, author, I think you can promote it in the circle.

To be honest, it's hard to write a book about a pig's trotters who return to Novice Village to show off and get slapped in the face after being leveled up. A boss who has lived for thousands of years goes to a kindergarten to play house with children. Is that fun to show off? Not to mention thousands of years ago, even if you were reborn in your thirties or forties, would you be interested in slapping the brats in school?

But. . . Is the new one too short? . . Pick up the clothes, spread the gossip, and review just one chapter 😰

I finally found a book that I can read. The plot and IQ are both online. I have read two or three novels about being reborn after cultivating a great path. The protagonist is simply a zz and has no background whatsoever in having lived for hundreds or thousands of years.

The first chapter is very poisonous at the beginning. Has the author never read the novel? Don't you know that some old sayings have become toxic?

I keep seeing the one where you choose a fox or an animal, and I really can't stand it anymore. Do you have to pretend like this?

There are just too few and updates are too slow!

Make a complaint ┐('~`；)┌. . The male protagonist of the plot is awesome, he shows off his skills in various ways, and the female protagonist makes all kinds of mistakes. . . The male protagonist doesn't want it, and then it gets it all in the finale. The story line is almost like this. If you want to write your own book, you have to have your own ideas. Even if you lose, it doesn't matter. If you win and make money, you can open up a new path for yourself. . . . Goodbye hard work. .

Dear author, let me tell you something first. Ordinary people can live to be 100 years old on average, and they almost understand the world, and can see through grudges and cunning. The protagonist who has lived for 3,000 years should be able to see through those things, right? So what I mean is, can you write more inner drama? The other thing is to portray the protagonist more "lively", if your skills allow it. Because I have lived for 3000 years, right? Thank you😘😚😗😙

Three Thousand Years Good should pay equal attention to science, technology and martial arts. It cannot be a complete society by focusing solely on martial arts.