Starship Chef

No one here said that the author's battleship setting is too naive? The data is written in a bunch of nonsense. Especially the Japanese fleet in chapter 323. I thought it was a small fishing boat modified by Pirates of the Caribbean! This firepower is simply opening an aircraft carrier to stop DJI, and launching Yamato to play RPG! There is absolutely no firepower at all, it would be better to hit it with a boat! I mentioned a bunch of examples in Chapter 323. If you are interested, you can take a look. I felt so embarrassed after reading it. If the author wants to set up data in the future, he can set it up according to the proportions I gave you. Your original data is too naive(s)(b), and it makes me laugh when I read it.

The protagonist is not mentally retarded and his behavior is okay. As an ordinary cook, it is normal for him to be mentally retarded when encountering big events. After all, the protagonist is just an ordinary cook. But there are many bugs in the book that I have to mention: 1. The examiner of the military examination cheated the soldiers and was caught doing it. How could he continue to stand in the examination room? Moreover, there is no remedy for those who have been tricked. It is unreasonable to exclude everyone from the protagonist group. Even if it is an exam just like school, where is the protagonist group? In a military camp, military law is followed. Soldiers are found to be cheating and are expelled from the army on the spot. Examiners are found to be cheating and are shot. It is considered a light sentence. Moreover, they trick soldiers so that they cannot complete the exam normally. If they are caught, why are there no penalties? 2. That loli (forgive me for being illiterate) is too mentally retarded. Although I know the author wants to use the attribute of loli to attract loli fans, but she is an adult in her twenties, and she is also a captain. She makes all kinds of awkward and unreasonable troubles. Is she really a genius who has passed the captain's theoretical assessment? Why do you look like an immature little loli who suddenly got a golden finger? The protagonist, an ordinary cook, is more mature than her. 3. It is normal for the first female captain to be excluded (whether it is the assessment or the burden-dropping before Vulcan support can be explained), but the blatant rejection of the captain meeting on Vulcan is too much (female captains are explicitly not allowed to participate). Although the female captain's rank is a bit low, she is still She is also an official captain appointed by the military. Everyone openly rejects the official captain appointed by the military. Strictly speaking, it is blatant disobedience and will be shot. Even if it is just to pretend to let her sit there and then treat her as transparent and mute, it is better than to openly refuse her to join the captain's meeting.

The author's architectural design is very good, balancing all details of the environment. You can see all aspects of food, clothing, housing and transportation at the same technological level, which requires a very hard balance. But there are some improvements, first of all, the perspective. To be honest, once the chef's story is separated from the Chinese land, it will lose its charm. Many English elements have been added. On the surface, it seems to be as cool as Star-Lord, but it makes the problem more obvious. This can only be adjusted in the structure. Then there is the profession itself. If you are not sure to write about a profession to the extreme in the novel, otherwise it is better to define it as ordinary and daily, and avoid overly professional treatment. Finally, there is the perspective. The interstellar background only has wars and adventures. It is difficult to connect the lives of small people with the fast pace, so similar narratives have multiple lines to make up for it. Come on, author, "No More Regrets YF" mutual fans~~

,,, I gave up when I saw that I had also transformed into a woman.

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Added it to favorites, will read it 😁

It's so beautiful, really. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. I can't stop.

🤭🤭Congratulations! 🌹

Transgender is really NB

The author's writing skills are very solid, which is reflected in the suspense and reversal in the play. The settings are very sophisticated and beautiful.

It's a good subject, keep writing and fattening it up before slaughtering it. Also why am I so handsome?

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I don't know what the author's mentality is, thinking that the chef is physically weak. Besides, I've been reading novels for almost 15 years, and I've never seen anyone more mentally retarded than the protagonist.

Not bad! The article is quite immersive!

When I saw the gender change and suddenly became a woman, I lost interest in the book. This is a perversion.

No one should have seen me cheating down there and eating it! !

The author's protagonist makes people feel like a sissy! Suspected of abusing the main text

Those who ask for communication are all advertising so that the author can buy recommendation votes.

After I read the content, I felt very good. I like this idea and hope to work together to create more good works for readers, Xiaojiu.

I read a few chapters, and I feel that the author is forcibly suppressing the protagonist's thinking; Just asking, during training, did the agent program ascend to heaven? Or did the author eat it? Is it possible that an agent/(other training materials) is not as good as a big-headed soldier who has just joined the army? This is a logical problem, right? (If you look at physical fitness, at least there is a buffer, and you just go to the army based on that quality. How confident you are!) It feels like a forced explanation (the brain is a good thing) And that light blue, I don't know what the author wants to express. The light blue you wrote is a program assistant? Or artificial intelligence. Artificial intelligence (personal guess) must at least be able to think, find problems, and find ways to solve them. I feel like she is just a prompter, without thinking (thinking), she just comes out to give reminders when problems arise (no suggestions/solutions to problems). Personally, I feel that the protagonist's spirit is really (I don't know how to describe it) rough. He has no desire to become stronger (nagging the chef all day long), but he took the initiative (I feel even more embarrassed that you wrote it passively) and ran to the Star Battleship to enlist in the army! Hey! Forget it, stop nagging, see you again when we are destined!

It's really good to read. It would be best if the author could turn into a Super Saiyan and write ten chapters a day, no, twenty chapters.

I just discovered this book and haven't read a few chapters. Let me ask a question, do the humans on this planet have anything to do with the earth? Look at the part about pretending to be a police officer and it talks about a detective from Earth.

What is your wedge for?

It's really uncomfortable for the protagonist to turn into a woman, especially when he goes to hook up with someone, and even goes to a bathhouse to turn into a woman in front of a group of men, and he's not afraid of being xxxxx

A group of ** who tell lies with their eyes open, the plot of the first dozen chapters is so blunt 🤐🤐🤐

114, No need to count, this guy is quite cute (๑•́ωก̀๑).

It's not a food article, but I can still read it after I finish the trial reading.

First of all, this seems to have nothing to do with food. Secondly, the author seems to want to describe the growth of the protagonist, but the protagonist he writes is very childish.

It's worth watching, keep up the good work! Support!

The male protagonist is so disgusting! The heroine had nothing to do but found trouble with an instructor. The male protagonist uses his ability to interfere with the instructor's competition. Think about how a military region shooting champion soldier was deliberately broken by the male protagonist during the competition. What a blow it was. It was disgusting! Wrong outlook! poison poison poison poison