My Journey to Ancient Times

It's only 200,000 and I can't hold on, hey~

Let me talk about the pros and cons of this book. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. As one of the few Elder Scrolls fan works, the overall quality of this book is acceptable. It also supplements and expands on the original game, and fixes some unreasonable issues, such as the Skyrim map that is often criticized by players for being too small, the towns being too broken, etc. The most commendable thing is that the Dragonborn is male, which is much higher than those otaku demons who don't know what they are called. So far, there are no plot flaws or poisonous points. As for the shortcomings, there are not many at the moment. First of all, the writing style needs to be improved. The treatment of the original plot is a bit too general, which can easily lead to a lack of sense of immersion for non-game players. Secondly, the character of the Nords is not well grasped, their wildness and unruliness are not described, and they are a bit like the crowd. Finally, there is the treatment of the protagonist, including his growth and personality. Non-game players can easily feel disgusted with protagonists with low force values. Although Lao Gun players know how to become stronger, if others don't know, it will weaken the sense of fun and feel that the protagonist is too soy, too virginal, too naive, etc. Although these are harmless, they still affect the senses. That's all for now. The details depend on the author's handling. Don't rush to change your writing ideas, just take your time. After all, there are really few masterpieces by Lao Gun, and we can only be magnanimous (laughing)

Personally, I still don't like Chinese names popping up in the Western Fantasy world, and the sense of immersion instantly drops.

The most annoying thing is people who write fan fiction without knowing the plot.

When you read Lao Gun's article, you don't realize that Lao Gun's protagonist has no sense of immersion at all (personally), bye

Thick face😭😭😭

I just want to say that there are too few ancient themes. Come on, author.

I'd rather not find any Elder Scrolls fan fiction to read than read this. Travel through the past. I have never played the protagonist of Lao Gun. Don't know anything, it's like watching a movie.

Since you write Lao Gun, it means you are a veteran player of Lao Gun. In the first picture, you can't tell that the protagonist is a veteran player of Lao Gun.

Well, after watching two of them, the protagonist doesn't know Lao Gun at all.

How often does the author update? It's so irregular.

Why is it that even the small cemetery in Xueman City is full of ancient corpses😰

I just read Chapter 46 and I feel bad about it. Although I feel that the author wanted to write something, I won't mention the cliche plot. The last time I saw it was 5 years ago. This portrayal of the protagonist is simply a failure. It can be called a model of foolhardiness. There are many ways to save the little girl, but he chose the stupidest one. I don't know what the author is thinking. Is the hymn of mankind the hymn of courage? Behavior Childish behavior, naive thinking. It has a great impact and a sense of identification. It is recommended that the author read more books and learn more about characterization and emotional expression . It can be seen that the author is quite thoughtful and paid good attention to some details, but the basic plot of the novel cannot be lost.

After reading the previous point, there are several things that I can't stand. 1. Why is it a Chinese name? It's so awkward to suddenly have a Chinese name in a Western-style environment. 2. It seems that there is no game memory. Since it is written about ancient times, why don't you bring the memory to wear it? If you don't bring the memory, what is the difference between dressing in the ancient times and wearing it in other places? 3. What the hell is the sentence "Martial luck is prosperous" suddenly popping up in the conversation with Ulfric.

Ha, warrior stone two-handed weapon, this is good. What kind of mage do you want to be? The two-handed hero can kill all the way. There is also a rare male dragonborn and a team of brothers. You don't need to use stealth, although the two-handed bow is also very handsome. By the way, author, are you going to stick to the original version without adding mods? At least things like combat arts and magic expansion.

A chapter of 1,000 words... The author has no lower limit

Can the author finish it faster? There are not enough people writing The Elder Scrolls.

Dragonborn is divided into two types: dragon blood and dragon soul 🤫 The last generation belongs to dragon soul and dragonborn

Congratulations on the launch 👍

Come on, it's okay to write slowly 😁

I just want to say that there are too few ancient themes, please come on 🤓

Because he is the protagonist, he works hard and is so confident that he puts himself into a desperate situation and then explodes to solve it. Alas😔!

There are too few good fan fictions about ancient times. This one is quite good.

The writing is indeed good, and the character descriptions are supplementary to some deficiencies in the game as well as some self-written plots. It is the best among the dozens of books about The Elder Scrolls that I have seen so far.