Let That Muggle Go

To be honest, I felt pretty good at the beginning, and it's understandable that the author said it was too messy and cut it off. First of all, it is obvious that this book has a lot of HP influences, which can be seen in aspects such as the Muggle Dark Lord's flying broomstick. The author added fantasy creatures and magic of different races, turning a low-demon world into a high-demon world. However, problems also appeared, that is, it was too fast, the Dark Lord appeared too early, and there were too many cheats (Dragon Nest Book, Black Snake, Broom, System, Dark Lord, the identity of the descendant of the mysterious boss). The author is not writing an invincible article. In fact, it has collapsed at this point. The point is how many words are there now? Basically, the only way out for the author is to change it to invincible writing, or to create a map, but both sides are very average. . In short, I hope the author will work hard on the next book, write about Ooka, and control the plot so that it doesn't go too fast. The other parts are not bad either.

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Why can't Chapter 8 and Chapter 9 be connected? It feels like there is a plot missing in the middle.

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