The World’s Greatest Director

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I just finished watching it and it feels pretty good. It's the story about the protagonist's father's money and classmates in the principal's routine that is really written... The author also underestimates the energy of the CEOs of almost leading companies in the county, and also thinks too highly of the principal of the high school in the small county. Skipping class for a week is really not a big deal. When he meets a class teacher who knows how to lick, he will make a big deal out of it. Then he will wait for the principal to cheat money, which is embarrassing. Also, all the female classmates thoughtlessly defended the little girl and ridiculed the protagonist. This was so smart that I didn't want to continue reading the entertainment article after seeing this. But overall it's pretty good

After reading Chapter 30, I have a few questions that I would like to ask: 1. The whole school is targeting the protagonist and his father. Did I miss something in the plot earlier, or did the two of them do something outrageous? 2. It doesn't feel like it's just a fantasy. What do you do as a protagonist in movies and TV series? Original or semi-original works are not very immersive. If the description of the work is average and the ratings are good or the box office is high, it will be very abrupt. 3. Novels need various plots, excitement, and conflicts. After reading it for so many years, I feel that it is not very good to blindly rely on villains to create plots. In such a plot, I can only feel that the protagonist is sick - barking everywhere, and no matter where he goes, others can't stand him and will find trouble with him... I feel like the protagonist has done something fruitful, and then a bunch of people shout 666 and like this kind of plot. Is it better? As the saying goes, "Invisible pretense is the most deadly." Well, this point is still about the school plot.

Tell me your opinion. First, the advantages of this book are that it is relatively professional, it feels more real and enjoyable, and the writing style is okay, barely enough to make a scene. The creativity is not bad But the disadvantages are also obvious. First, it is a watery story, and the story of returning to school, I skipped two of them in one breath, and it did not affect the plot at all. The main plot was very slow, and even halfway through writing, I turned around to write about other people, preparing to be slapped in the face later. . It was frustrating to watch. Second, slaps in the face, except for the more professional face-slapping clips, other slaps in the face are basically bloody. Cliché, cliché, very straightforward, I updated a chapter, first I was stepped on, then slapped in the face, and then I pretended to be cool, I read the first page, then the last page, and basically knew the plot of this chapter. . Slapping people in the face and pretending to be cool is a deep-rooted hobby in human beings. Although you never get tired of it, you still have to write it well. Your writing of slapping people in the face and pretending to be cool is a routine. Straightforward. Bloody shit. It's cliché, it's a trick that was done ten years ago, but now it seems that it's really annoying and boring. . Writing the main plot honestly is much better. Third, character creation is distorted. Sometimes, the characters are distorted, and their words and actions are not consistent with his status. For example, when the protagonist took the exam, the examiner even said the word "presumptuous". . What about writing a fantasy costume drama? ? , In real life, which examiner would say that it is unrestrained? ? It's also a problem with the characters. Sometimes, in order to show off in the face, I force the writing to be like this, and the things the characters are asked to do are no longer logical. . For example, the teachers are all mean and arbitrary, the classmates are all vicious, all kinds of jealousy, stepping on the protagonist, and then the protagonist is like a fighter, resisting and getting slapped in the face,,, what about chuunibyou? . Only a chuunibyou would feel that the whole world is full of malice toward them, that they are just a group of high school students, not friendly at all, and that all their classmates are either jealous or bitter, slandering, scorning, and ridiculing them in all kinds of ways. . . Whose youth does this fit? It's the same routine as domestic youth movies. . On the contrary, I prefer the villain, who is tall and handsome, became famous at a young age, has a scheming mind, can endure, can talk to people and tell ghosts, and can smile when meeting the protagonist and pretend to be a good person. Although from the perspective of the protagonist, this person seems hypocritical and scheming, but in real life, such a wealthy, well-spoken, good-looking, good-looking, lucky person, really will not succeed?

The crayfish self-built building is mainly used to thank those Xiuer who support crayfish by giving rewards~

After reading four chapters, that woman is very annoying. I don't know if she is the heroine. I don't understand why I want to write a thief and have to clean up her innocence. It's disgusting.

This is an online article, especially a new book. The pace cannot be slow, otherwise it will easily become boring. The previous main plot is very good at getting admitted to the directing department. Then the part-time job was fine. But the period when I started filming the micro-film after I entered school was obviously delayed. Don't write too detailedly. You want to cover every aspect of daily life. Unless you update more than 10,000 words a day, readers will easily not be able to read it. It's so fast that it's almost 100 chapters to make a movie and write a director's story, and I haven't even started shooting a micro-movie yet!

I was speechless when I found out that many people said that Zhang Jue was not clean. They all said that she was picked up. Later, when the protagonist went back to the Internet cafe and didn't see her, they called her a female thief. Some people always said that she was a thief. Money is human nature, and it doesn't matter if you have a conscience and will wait for the owner. Is it a crime to spend the money you found (I really don't know). Isn't it a crime to pay the money back after you found it and spent it? Zhang's comment always said that she stole it and took it without asking and then forcibly laundered it.

A piece of meat like this is 100% cold after being splashed with feces. No matter what the reason is, what is the selling point of the piece of meat? ? ? Think about the way he poops on the top of his head. Even if he is innocent and was accidentally injured, everyone will sympathize with him, but he still gets cold. . . .