The Sky Is Too White

Let me see your little hands!

Write here the classic lines of the Tiandao character that are most familiar and impressive to you. Young hero, please come to the front of the hall and speak!

Dog too white? Do you have Mr. Turtle, Sister Pig, Brother Sandbag, etc.

Taibai is nothing. Zhenwu: I still like you very much, just like the flowing clouds in Xiangzhou, the whisks sweep over Tai Chi, driving away the shadow without a trace. Tangmen: I still like you very much, the green bamboos of Bashu, the puppets annihilate the joys and sorrows, the flying flowers and star rain Shen Dao: I still like you, like the setting sun in Xuhai, the eagle soaring back to the sky, the eagle striking in the sky Tianxiang: I still like you, like the flying flowers in East Vietnam, the beautiful music of the piano leaves the old city and the pure heart hangs jade. Five Poisons: I still like you very much, like a fire on the top of the clouds, the light of a knife disappearing into the dense forest, an unparalleled mirage Beggar Gang: I still like you very much, like a boat on Jing Lake, the fragrance of wine filling the air, chasing the wind and kicking Taibai: Woof woof woof woof woof, woof woof woof woof, woof woof woof woof, note woof woof woof. Shenwei: I still like you very much, like Yan Yun Yangsha spear guarding the flag with blood, invincible and selfless.

When are you going to write the plot of Sky Sword? This world is both strange and familiar to me.

To be honest, it's too blunt and not suitable for the world of Japanese comics. It would be better to write about Chinese comics, such as Qin Shi Mingyue, Bad People, etc.

It's so sweet to play, the dog master is a white dog... He fights with me every day and bullies me.

When you get drunk and forget where you moved the flowers, who will play the jade flute in the wind?

I deleted the previous post and re-wrote it with suggestions. The first point: It is written in the introduction that this is an unlimited flow. In other words, you will travel to another world and many other worlds later. So the question is, what is the reason for traveling to various worlds? No matter how nonsense it is, there is definitely one reason. If this reason is a foreshadowing, then there is no need to write it clearly, but it should be hinted at the front. (Although it has been introduced and written, when I read the book, I forgot that it was an infinite stream) Second point: The problem with the protagonist, what the protagonist does should have a purpose. If the long-term goal does not appear or is foreshadowed, there is always a short-term goal. Short-term goals such as surviving in this world, long-term goals such as redeeming (or helping) a favorite character, becoming stronger and becoming the best in the world. Then make your own actions towards this goal. The protagonists I see now seldom (I mean rarely, not none) take the initiative to do anything. Basically, it just follows the development of things and plays a dispensable role in the plot. One thing, admission. I didn't write clearly why I entered this school (this is what confused me the most. I traveled through time and knew that this was a two-dimensional world, and then I went to the school, found a girl, and asked for admission. I had a question mark. I just said that she is the center of this world. Yes, I know, and then what? What are you going to do?). The second thing is to eat. The reason for this is that I am hungry, which is a bit nonsense. Perhaps the author just wants to write a story with this style of painting? The rest of the story seems to be just going with the flow. Follow others, react as things happen. I have no idea what the protagonist is doing. Since the protagonist knows the original story, shouldn't the protagonist use what he knows to do something if he has a purpose? I have read an article about Fairy Sword III before, which basically retells the plot of Fairy Sword III, with the protagonist interspersed in the middle and making some detailed changes. In fact, the whole story hasn't changed much. It was very boring to read, and I didn't know why I finished reading it at the time (I remember it was relatively short, so I finished it quickly)... Since there is a protagonist, let's write around the protagonist. (Shouldn't this be a group portrait novel?) If the protagonist is dispensable, why should the protagonist do anything? The third point: The problem of plot. There must always be something to drive the plot forward. Most of the system flows are tasks issued by the system to promote the development of the plot. The protagonist system is purely for cheating and does not advance the plot. Then there should be something else to promote the plot. For example, the protagonist's purpose mentioned above, when the protagonist pursues the purpose and acts, various things will happen. What should be written should be the story of the protagonist, rather than a protagonist who has a small role in the story. Of course, it doesn't mean that you can't write from the perspective of the protagonist. Of course it's okay to write an original story like this, but this has an original story, and the protagonist is a spoiler. In my opinion, the charm of Mugenliu lies in the appearance of the protagonist. The various actions of the protagonist lead to changes in the original world story. In the current plot of more than 60,000 words, I can't see anything that attracts me. So, with 60,000 words, is the site short? Have you signed a contract? The only thing that interested me was the time-travel scene at the beginning, which was really great for me. It was this scene that made me insist on reading it and writing so many words. The rest of the content doesn't appeal to me at all. I know, writing stories is actually difficult. I also write stories myself, and every time I finish writing them, I send them to my good friends to read them over. Ask him, how is it, can you stand it? I spent a few years writing, rewriting, and writing, but then I wasn't ready to publish a book on impulse. I felt good about the previous content, so I signed it quickly. However, after a week of writing, I found that the later serials were incomparable to the previous ones that had been revised n times, so I stopped. Prepare to write later. I am currently working on another book and will publish it when I have a certain number of words. I had to wait until my level improved before writing, which was the hard work I had put in for several years. MD seems to be going too far. I felt that the author wanted to write this story well, so I took the time to read it slowly from the first chapter. Then I will slowly list everything I feel below this post.

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