Bound for Immortality

A miracle happened on Valentine's Day. I received the on-site letter signing the contract this morning. Thank you fellow Taoists for your support. Fortunately, I have not let down the dozens of friends who invested~

Analyzing it, this novel is the best and most vivid one I have read in the past ten years in describing the characters and psychology, especially women. It is also the biggest advantage of the book. It is very touching to read, and the dialogues are particularly immersive. However, the storyline and layout are insufficient, and many structures are not rigorous enough to be attractive. Perhaps the system of cultivating immortals in this novel is more logical, but the world of Jianghu and cultivating immortals is still not rigorous enough, and there are many bugs. If the author can improve the plot and leave suspense appropriately, this book will be much more exciting. The plot is the most difficult to grasp. I would like to ask the author to supplement the plot and learn more about other excellent novels, and read more about other excellent novels of the same type. After completing the supplements, I will definitely become a platinum writer. Other problems mainly include the protagonist's character, which is difficult to accept. The plot is inherently draggy. The protagonist's character has not yet been perfected. Now there are more than 500 pictures. He is still 16 years old. His ambition to be a hero makes people feel childish for his good deeds. Now that he is an adult, he can help the world if he achieves it. Otherwise, he is childish and naive. He has a family and difficulties. He can't live a good life without himself. He just wants to be a hero. , Sacrificing one's life for others, especially young and young, some of which make people feel a little funny, empty, hypocritical, and hard to read. This is the biggest shortcoming of this book in my opinion. A person wants to contribute to the world because a person's spiritual realm has reached a certain height and he has enough motivation to do so when he sees clearly where he and the world are. Only then can he get happiness from this thing, otherwise there would be no such idea. This little protagonist is not sincere enough and is described as a bit silly. It feels inappropriate to use this method to exaggerate fairness, justice, etc.

Popular category recommendations start at 2 o'clock on Sunday. It is said that it is not as popular as the serial... There are three updates and four updates this week, but the data is not as good as before. Are mosquitoes really poisonous = = Two updates will be released slowly today and tomorrow, and additional updates will be added as appropriate starting on Sunday. I hope that every book lover who is looking for books will raise the light stick in your hand to let me know that someone is reading, thank you! ~

If you are interested, leave your name + male and female, and I will try my best to arrange it~ But to be honest, there are not many supporting actors in the current outline, and there are even fewer named supporting actors. The ones that really have names all have certain roles, so even if they are arranged, it may take a long time to appear, so I can only ask you to stick to it until then~ p. S. If you have requirements for the character, please give a rough description, or look up (a certain group) to find me. After all, if you want to be a glorious young man, but it turns out to be a despicable villain, it will be bad, right~😃

I wish you a successful signing of this book by building a building here.

Come on, I like this kind of slow-paced fairy tale novels the most.

The narration is slow and slow, and it is interlocking. I watch A Yuan grow up little by little. It is a very attractive story. It is another novel that attracts me to read recently except after the disappearance of the immortal. It is great, but the popularity is too low. I hope the author can keep writing it I haven't seen the paid chapters yet, so order some first.

Although all the book friends enthusiastically supported it, there were only a dozen or so subscriptions. People on the streets still felt desolate and unable to write. The first volume is coming to an end, and I think it's time to go out and promote it, but I don't know any good channels or means. I would like to ask all book friends to give you some advice, or at least tell me how you found this book, as a reference. Thank you! !

If you have any questions, discussions, or complaints about the plot, please leave them here and the author will reply as appropriate~ If you think there are any bugs, you can post them here and see if the author can handle them~ First of all, let me talk about two questions I want to ask everyone: 1. Why is the pace so slow in the first dozen or so pictures of the book? I believe that many people may leave after reading the prologue without reading a few chapters because the early pace is slow and they don't know what to say. In fact, I also expected that the words that I put my heart and soul into would have no readers, just like the fairy tales fabricated by A Yuan. But this book has really been written for ten years. Many things in the beginning seemed to have become real memories, and I was really at a loss to change it. I didn't know how to start. The whole book is from A Yuan's perspective, and it also witnesses the growth process of a young man. Life in his hometown is like a happy childhood. Without this part, it would be difficult for me to imagine that A Yuan could keep his true heart in the subsequent hardships and tribulations. So, let's just do it. I hope more readers can survive this period~ and even find fun in it, and the subsequent stories will be more exciting~ Also, in fact, there are a lot of foreshadowings left in the previous chapters. Maybe if you look back one day, you will find a lot of fun. But as a novice Internet writer, writing like this is indeed a sign of immaturity... 2. Who is the heroine in the book? I said before that there is no clear female protagonist in the book, so it depends on the individual. But this does not mean that the beauties in the book are dispensable. Each character has his own personality and desires, and they will not always be around the protagonist. According to the plot and ending I have planned now, there are three female characters who can accompany the protagonist until the end. In a sense, they are the heroines. Interested book friends can guess which three they are. Based on the current clues, the one who can be guessed is definitely the true god~

The usual protagonists are all unique, but this book has many characters, all of whom are interesting.