Performing Martial Arts Across the Heavens

The author should be diligent, it's all about money.

Here's a little suggestion for the author: The author of "Yanwu Zhutian" has a very good writing style, and there is no obstacle in reading the text. I read 80,000 words in one go. Then I found that the author likes to use third-perspective text to summarize the story, which does not make the reader feel that he is telling a complete story from beginning to end. Secondly, the text gives the reader very little information. After reading it, I feel that it is a bit vague and does not strengthen the conflict and hatred. It is too much to fight blindly. My little suggestion is to write a stronger story and give readers more important information. For example, what is the reason for causing hatred, why should I hit him, and what is hateful about him. If these points can be achieved, I believe the author is not far away from becoming a god.

Eight mistakes, eight mistakes, where is the applause? ? ? 🤭🤭🤭 I haven't seen such a good book in a long time! ! ! ! Come on! ! Sao Nian. Give me a recommendation vote first. As long as you keep it, I will definitely book it all! ! I would like to make a small suggestion. When describing the characters, the movements are a bit fast, so the reading experience is a bit flawed, and it is a bit difficult to get into the drama! ! ! Some personal thoughts🙏🙏

How should I put it? It's very poisonous. A child of a family, and a child of a very prestigious family, was crippled by others. Just throw it aside like this, what do you want the other family members to think? Why are you working so hard? If you treat yourself like this when you are injured, no one will dare to work hard in the future. Even if we are injured, we have to throw it aside. Hehe. If this is really done, the death of the family is not far away. It shows that the family is short-sighted, has no ambition, and does not know how to unite the family's strength.

After a quick glance at this book, the biggest drawback is that there are too many descriptions of the characters' moods, which is so boring to read! If you can kill people, don't push too hard. With one move, you can decide life and death. It's fun for you and it's fun for me too. Isn't it great?

Another one who writes about other worlds under the guise of the heavens. It's almost sixty chapters and I haven't seen him travel through it yet.

I hope the author will not use the word "traveler" from time to time. Since the protagonist has a name, just use his name, and there is no need to keep reminding him that he is a time traveler. This greatly affects the reading experience!

I would like to ask, are there any substantial benefits to being on the list? Did I not see it, or did I not? Why not develop obscenely?

The maid at the beginning was a bit cliched, and later on, I didn't understand the world view, so she just killed her family members casually? Can this kind of family be passed down? ? ?

The writing is too contrived. You have to understand that the books on becoming a god are all written by novices.