A Cold Scholar in Chang'an

This romance is so melodramatic!! As a modern person, you either like someone or you don't. You've been married before. If you can bring your wife into this story, fine, then use modern morality to set standards for yourself. Why are so many protagonists in time-travel novels like saints when they arrive in ancient times, acting like they can't forget someone they can never be with again, and…

The idea is good, keep it up! The beginning shows a bit of conflict between his longing for his wife and his interest in his landlady; I'll have to revise that.

Writing a book is not easy. The plot is too cliché. Almost all books about the Tang Dynasty follow the same formula. First, there's a character who shows off, either attracting Li Shimin or Cheng Yaojin or other ministers. Cheng Yaojin is always shameless, and then the protagonist fawns over him.

The son is a major flaw, already poisoning the plot after only a few chapters.

Beginners can take a look, but I couldn't stand it; it was instantly an eyesore.

Old bookworms, don't bother reading this, you'll embarrass yourself.

The protagonist, who's really down on his luck, transmigrates to the past and lives a life of hardship and danger with his child. How did he end up like this? He's got a bit of cleverness, a bit of a saint, and a total idiot protagonist.

After reading so many time-travel stories where the protagonist dares not say anything, it's rare to find a protagonist who finally dares to admit they're from thousands of years in the future.

Suitable for beginners; a bit awkward for seasoned readers.

This is so embarrassing, it's like something out of the Tang Dynasty! The balloon flew away, fine, but it got shot down too. Writing like this deserves to be a flop.