Super Fighter System

Same as what other book friends said. First, it's messy. The author doesn't grasp the rhythm of the narrative very well, and it's very tiring to watch. And it is difficult to get important information. Suddenly traveled through time and obtained the system, and then found out that he was involved with Yinchao. He went to the martial arts gym with Fa Xiao to fight in the ring, won, and then Yinchao came to visit... Is there nothing wrong with the process when viewed this way? However, these processes miss the point. Let's talk about it in a straightforward manner, without focusing on any specific link in detail. No details, no omissions, but equal treatment, and the description of both rain and dew makes the readers unable to find the key point. The ring battles that should be described carefully are like a running account, one after another comes on stage, and then a few sentences of description are beaten down by the protagonist. It has no characteristics and no passion for action description. And just let us know: the protagonist learned basic xx, xx, and xx with the help of the system. But the specific reflection is not intuitive enough, that is, the description of the action scenes looks boring. This is very problematic for a book where fighting is the main element. Hope it can be polished more later. Second, the places and many clues that should be described carefully or highlighted are briefly mentioned. For example: the clue - the sound nest, the writing is too jumpy and brief. The sound nest card left by my father was not explained clearly, and the mental assassination was not explained clearly. At least the characteristics of the techniques used by the assassins were explained. Then suddenly Angel and Foxy came... At this time, I felt like: Did I miss a dozen chapters? So I deliberately scrolled back to find clues about the sound nest... Emmmmm, there are indeed too few. I think it is these two issues that lead to confusion and unclear expressions. The other thing is that other book friends said it is complicated, but this is actually not a problem. Fighting is inherently an unfamiliar field, and it is a combination of several different fighting games with a world view. It is good to write them separately (low number of words). Otherwise, it is easy to have bugs when integrating into other games such as Guilty Gear and Blue Wings. It is also easy to lose the essence of the book and become an article about fighting monsters and upgrading. Therefore, I think it is only necessary to have a unified strength evaluation system. Different body skills, steps, etc. Are one of the essences.

How to say it? The writing is okay, but the data is too huge, it seems very messy, and it's not fun. For example, for basic steps, you write so many steps, jump steps, sliding steps, etc. It's too many and it's very confusing. In fact, there is no need to break it down too finely. The data is the basic pace, and then the level experience, and how many levels you have reached before using skill points to unlock the next level of skills. For example, the basic pace is zero stars, and the higher level pace is zero-point five-star or one-star. This is much better.

Be a new author. Look hard. I still can't stand it. There are problems with the layout and narration, making it confusing! There is absolutely no need to read the first chapter, it would be better to skip it.

Passers-by taunted, and then the duel progressed. I don't know who invented this routine first, but it is used all over the Internet. Feel silly

The data is too messy, the data is huge, and there are too many mysterious and divided external and internal forces, which makes me dizzy. It is better to divide the physical strength, agility, and mental energy into clear and clear grades using ABCD. Generally good, but occasionally there are a few bad spots

Pig's feet is trash, I can't stand him!

It's a mess, the protagonist gets bored at every turn, gets angry one second and laughs the next, deep well ice!

Can the author add Saberya?

What's the difference between that and salted fish! ! !

It seemed very tiring, so I just read two chapters. There was nothing to say in the first chapter. The second chapter started to feel very inexplicable. It jumped too fast, and then the explanation started again, which was a bit abrupt. The data was very helpless.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that the protagonist is extremely mentally unstable. He is moody and mentally ill. He is angry at one moment, laughing at another, and at the same time he thinks that the other person looks down on you and thinks that the other person is incompetent! (Actually, normal teachings say that you don't have novice mistakes, but aren't you a novice? You haven't practiced boxing for more than a day!) After a while, others will praise you a few times, and you will feel so proud and smile guiltily, what the hell! Also, if you can't learn the secrets, you lose your temper, you're crazy! How long have you been studying? Mdzz! Learn it once and you'll know who you think you are! I don't have any numbers in mind! He often gets nervous and says he has a nerdy personality and doesn't get angry easily. What the hell is this? His personality is worse than that of a child. He is moody and is a psychopath!

After reading the introduction, I feel that martial arts really cannot beat Fist of the North Star. The Fist of the North Star can touch you and you will be dead. All kinds of explosions, blood and flesh spraying out randomly. Easily knock down a tall building with one punch, directly pressing on him, and then pass through it. When he stood up, he could smash the iron bed into slag. He could hold the magma with his bare hands, stand on the magma, and blast it with a tank, without losing a hair, and even kicked the tank. There is also a bug-level phaseless reincarnation! How to fight?

I've read a few chapters. It's all about cultivation and no plot 😥. It's too wordy.

If he wanted to learn boxing, didn't Chunli give him a chance from the beginning? Look down on Chun-Li?

I don't think the protagonist is mentally ill! One moment he was inexplicably angry, and the next moment he was smiling with the other person! Emotions change faster than changing faces! Feel like a madman! The moody kind!

The author, Iron Fist, the demon in Blood Revenge transforms into such a cool guy that he can also emit light waves and fly.

What a mess. Can't see it. I really want to see this kind of subject matter. But I really can't see it