Global Human Beings Are Thugs

In fact, I was reading it well and felt that it was okay. Suddenly I saw the author saying something about what readers thought about a certain character, and I wanted to change it. I read the comments and asked, author, what do you care about them? If it was really bad, would everyone vote for this? They would just read the book silently, and don't make a few comments to make them doubt their ideas.

Fortunately, the author made it clear that she is not the heroine, otherwise she would really not be able to accept it and would not be interested in the willful young lady's temper.

In Chapter 45, the style of painting changed suddenly. This article has been scrapped. The author was led into a pit by some readers. Writing should be consistent to the end. The early style has already screened readers. People who don't like this novel gave up as early as Chapter 10. You have written more than 40 chapters and your style of painting has changed. How many people can still read it? It's a pity that the author's writing style and narrative ability are okay, but the article is not thoughtful enough.

This woman is so annoying. The effect of persuading her to retreat is

What I want to read is the story about Scar, Baldhead and the others' sweat and blood. It would be too obvious to write about a girl who is gibbering and trying to persuade her to quit.

I really don't know what's going on with this girl's character. She's so messed up. In this situation, she must hug the protagonist's thigh to survive. She doesn't have much ability but still talks back. She's a mentally retarded character.

I feel like it's annoying to write about this woman's various psychological activities from the beginning. Isn't it good to write about how the protagonist develops? Who is the protagonist?

I think Xiao Yao can be the heroine

Behind every book is the author's painstaking efforts

I want to know why I lost contact with the last book

Ahhhhhhhhhh, this woman annoys me so much. She has all kinds of little thoughts, and she has no respect for the protagonist at all... When are we going to kill her... It just makes me sick

How did this new book become the 14th most clicked book ´_>`

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

At the beginning, write more about how the protagonist traveled through time and discovered it! It's not impossible to write some lively emotional scenes with a few supporting characters, even for people in the harem to watch, but be sure not to write those heroines who are unreasonable and make trouble as if everyone is surrounding them, which is a poisonous point! Of course, it can also be written in a dark style without a heroine. The character of the protagonist and his family background can be changed. Of course, that man has the power and can even change the fate of one person and many people. He doesn't want to marry more women. Not to mention him and his subordinates, this is the inevitable result! Of course, I have said so much and I can only say what I can say. If you ask me to write, I may not be as good as many people who just give their opinions to the author for reference!

I like the writing on this subject! Big cheers for the author!

Could the author let the protagonist show his wisdom?

The length and proportion of Yaoyao at the beginning are indeed unbalanced, but you, the author, should be aware that this results in readers who like her and dislike her accounting for the majority. People who like her are not to mention 50-50, even if it is 30-70, if you write her so miserable that there is no good ending, you will not be able to bear the loss of 30 people to persuade her to quit. Author, you should think carefully about Yaoyao's route arrangement.