There's a Big Problem with My Group Chat

Although I don't know if the author can still see it, I would like to comment before leaving. I hastily read about thirty chapters, and there are many illogical places. I haven't read much about the characters, so I won't comment. When Steve died, Steve, who immediately guessed it was MC, also added the setting that "some of the players controlling him have the personality". Obviously, including the previous swords, they have not been described in detail. Later, when passing items to Steve, the issue of having an avatar came up, which immediately caused a slight conflict with the previous situation of not knowing the specific identity of the sword. Finally, I saw the workbench for Haruhi Suzumiya. To be honest, I saw the protagonist get the workbench and contact the "administrator to transfer items without consumption" setting, so that he can conceive the plot of synthesizing some special items to conduct some transactions with other members or new members in the future. Then the protagonist gave his workbench to Haruhi. Emmm, although I don't know why the protagonist doesn't give Haruhi a workbench himself, or does he want to blacken Steve's dimensional value even more? But there is no doubt that this paragraph is really a bit mindless. Although it is already tj's book, I still want to comment on it since I have read it a lot. I don't know if these problems are the reason why this book is lukewarm, but it has something to do with it, right?

The author's depiction of Aizen is quite good, at least the B frame is up.

The book is very nice. It has a similar style to The Firm Beyond Dimension. It's good to try to make some regrets come true. As long as you keep writing, I will give you all the three tickets I can get every day, once a day 😃

Come on author, it's a great book

Blood Realm is a bit boring, what about the main plot?

If I can write, I will add it.

The posts now are all about . I heard that will increase the sperm, so I will come too (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

What kind of group are you? You are doing great harm to others! Who is the group leader! I'm going to call the police!

Words before the fz plot begins: Going to fz without saving Sakura is a time-travel without a soul. Daily tasks in the four battles: 1. Save Matou Sakura. 2. Hack the old bug to death. 3. Let the emperor lead the bullock cart to fight against Shining with all his strength 4. Untie the knot in Kuanglan's heart 5. Save Illya Although this will be more cliché But if you don't rewrite those tragedies, what are you going to do?

Speaking of which, there were several books of the same type that I followed but then I abandoned them because the protagonist started a harem I really don't like to break up cp To be honest I have always admired Yuantong Just like hope Lingli The protagonist said that he recognized Pandora as his sister and raised him as his sister The novels I read before that, as long as they were not related by blood, were all stuffed into the harem Tsk, tsk, tsk, tsk A few words of complaint I hope you don't mind.

The protagonist is disgusting and thinks he is superior to others, so he gives up.

Brother, you can update it every week or every month, but you can't stop updating it.

I stopped watching when I saw that the male protagonist traveled to the Fantasy World Front. After looking at the catalog, the male protagonist also wanted to travel to FZ. How can I put it, it feels like putting the cart before the horse. Chatting is mainly about chatting, and there is also a forced time travel. This has deviated from the original intention of the chat room. What is a chat room? It is mainly about chatting, but here chatting becomes incidental. It is mainly about time travel.

If SAO had such a pain system, I probably wouldn't even have the courage to go out to the starting town on the first level - Mr. Tong's inner drama after being slashed against the Goblin in the UW chapter

6 not 6

A small suggestion In Chapter 6, the main character in the chat group will not be named. . It's poisonous. I suggest you speak up. It's too inconsistent and alien among a group of people who have revealed their real names. Moreover, wouldn't it be better for you, the author, even if the protagonist has no story and is just a passerby? This way you don't have to think about the protagonist's world plot. Wouldn't it be more interesting if the protagonist was a protagonist in a work from another world?

Infinite Blood Book Protagonist's Female Clothes (1/Infinite)

I just read Chapter 34, and I feel that the rest of the novel is good, but the chat group function is poisonous ←_← Especially the function of completely random time travel. The protagonist will be tricked by this function at any time. It was clearly stated before that he could take one person with him to time travel, but the chat group function conflict during the time travel made it impossible to take the person with him. There are also a lot of restrictions on sending items, and I am too lazy to complain about others. It can be said that the function of the chat group is completely in line with the title of the article, and there are a lot of problems.