Fateful Criminal

After reading The Lost Love Game, let me give you a brief review There is no flaw in the logic. I have only read one volume of the plot and I will not comment at this time. But for now, the author does not write according to the routine, and the creation is relatively innovative, so that people will not be able to guess the full story after reading three chapters. The biggest shortcoming should be the narrative. After reading through the first volume, it can be said that the twists and turns of the plot are flawed, such as mechanical scene changes, dry character introductions, and some of the author's own settings are not presented to readers in a narrative way. For example, after the end of the first scene of the game of Lost Love, the protagonist brought out The machete in the game is removed and the reinforcement is retained. Maybe the author knew the rules and purpose of this game when writing, but readers who just saw this don't know it. It suddenly appeared. There should be a protagonist with high IQ analyzing the situation. Narrating some information in a reasoning way can make the reading experience better.

Support it to the best of your ability, and read what you see on other people's book lists. . I don't even watch fantasy genres😂, your efforts will be rewarded, come on

I just finished reading the first part. What can I say? The author's writing is very good, but there are too many foreshadowings in the beginning. He is too eager to lay out the world structure in his mind, but the reader does not know anything, so he is confused and can only force what the author gave into his mind, which inevitably makes him dizzy. After the first volume of more than 50 chapters, NPCs were arranged to barely introduce the background, but more holes were dug. The protagonist is also a confused character who doesn't know anything. He doesn't even know as much as his friend Lin Feng. However, his friend came out at the beginning and obviously knew more than the protagonist. He didn't even give any explanation. He just made a few dry humorous jokes and made a prop. The matter was over. You can at least arrange a puzzle-solving session to at least understand the current situation. Readers who follow the protagonist's vision are really frustrated and confused. To be honest, the author should not always think that something is delaying the work. It is because today's readers do not have the appreciation level. This kind of writing method that does not consider the readers at all is like fighting against the whole world out of anger, and the result is that a large number of readers will be rejected before the first volume. Many people do not even know that the second volume has changed the map and changed the content.

Let me take a look. If it looks good, I will issue a warning and set up the Teha people.

The book is good. I have ordered all of them. Good luck to the author.

Why do I feel so similar to Thriller Park?

I borrowed too much from Three Days and Two Sleeps

With long slender legs, slender arms, slender fingers, and a slender neck, this is a stickman, right?

If you can write it well, I will give you the recommendation votes for Chapter 6

Fill in water every day and strive to upgrade the book circle as soon as possible

All right. . . The author is no longer around. . . 😭

San Zha said during the live broadcast that Zhou Lin originally wanted to call the criminals 233333 It was also fate I wish this book will get better and better! ! !

Just keep reading this book and it will be finished.

I would like to ask the author, does this book have a female protagonist? If so, is the drama heavy? If it is just a few strokes, it can be read.

I want to ask, I heard that the first volume is not good, can I start reading from the second volume?

It looks good, why isn't it popular?

It's quite interesting. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt it was so confusing. Some things suddenly popped up without being mentioned at all. The map changed so quickly that I didn't even know what the protagonist was going to do 😰

Let's take a look tomorrow. To be honest, it's better not to mention too many scumbags. Be it book reviews or recommendations. If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight. This approach is a double-edged sword. It can indeed attract some fans at first, but it also changes the mentality of many people when they read the book. For a new book, many people will be more tolerant and read a few more chapters before deciding whether to pursue it or not. But using the name of Sanzha (even if it is not the intention) will directly raise the standards for many people to come in, and this will also lead to a restriction of the pattern. After writing, you may encounter a question later on: "Is it Ye Hengqiang or Feng Bujueqiang?" This is difficult to avoid, and I personally don't like books that mention other books. I can't help but compare and fail to understand the content.

Is this book a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

What subject is the author considering writing a new book on? The outline must be prepared well.

It's pretty good 😰 Why isn't it popular?

Let him live in a pig farm for a few days, um, that's it. Take your time and watch

If it looks good, order it all and remember to read the book reviews

Please tell me why Chapter 43 is gone!? If the author sees it, please reply ya 😳😳😳😳😳

What the hell is written? I can't understand it at all.

I just read Chapter 50. Such a good setting feels like it was ruined by the writing...

Weirdly, this is the only book we read and received a reward for

I hope the author will add something similar to data at the end of each chapter. I was a little confused when I read it. What is the human level? The combat power levels of monsters are different from those of humans, as well as the use of props. Otherwise, it will be a headache to read (it is really not friendly to readers like me who are a little rough in reading and don't have much patience...)

In which chapter does the heroine appear? ? ?