Leaping Across the Apocalyptic Wasteland

You can write such a vicious recommendation about Cui Zu and be scolded by so many readers. You are also a great author for this author.

First Observation: Observing the Great Dao The Great Way is formless and nameless; it is infinitely vast and infinitely small. The Way itself asks no questions, and questions ask no answers. What is the Dao? The Tao gives birth to heaven and earth and nurtures all things. Revealing the sun and moon, demonstrating the five elements, this is called the Dao;

Squid sightseeing tour, let's mark this down first.

I've already read the latest chapter of this book, and to be fair, it's really good. It got out of control. The author's writing skills have declined, but the plot is tight, making it a truly excellent book. Considering that the author never takes a break from updating, I couldn't resist showing off my recommendation tickets and monthly tickets. Keep up the good work, author! I'll save my recommendation votes for you every day!!!

Here's another book review, which I've lost count of how many times I've done, and it might be the last. After all, the author's progress is obvious. I think I might cross the line and presumptuously offer writing advice to the author, so let's just say this is the last time. Of course, I don't rule out writing something else in the future.

The book review is very sincere. From the blandness of the first chapter From being funny to achieving success The author put a lot of effort into this book, trying new things such as cross-dressing and being a "heartthrob" (a term for someone who is obsessed with someone).

It's incredibly stupid, the characters are awful.

In summary, firstly, as a newcomer, my grasp of priorities, pacing, style, and structure may not yet be fully developed, and I am working hard to learn. Secondly, in my personal opinion, the first few chapters, which are worth 60 points, overshadow the main content, which is worth 85 points or more, and I estimate that this has driven away quite a few readers.

Part One: Summary of Volume One I. Introduction There's a saying in online novels about the "golden three chapters," and the opening of "Leap" is a typical example of failure. In the original version, it was practically "thunderous and shocking," and also described as "the king of all poisons, leaving no trace of life."

I feel like banging my head against a wall and losing my memory. It's disgusting, so incredibly disgusting. I could write a whole essay about how disgusting it is.