The Peerless Sword Immortal of Konoha

It looks good at first, but I don't know what will happen next. I hope not all the characters in it are mentally retarded.

Big cheers for the author↖(^ω^)↗

I can't stand it anymore. Other protagonists who have a gold finger are trying their best to improve their gold finger. What is this idiot protagonist doing? Goodbye, luckily I didn't invest, wasting my free investment times

Author! I hope that the attack power and physical damage in the book will be deleted

Your book is called The Peerless Sword Immortal. Have you ever seen any sword immortal who rolled his eyes and waited for his clone to do Tai Chi? Do you really have an outline when writing a book? I feel like I can come up with one piece at a time. Let's make an outline here. What's written here? This is

Look at the title of your book. Do you know that your novel would be off-topic even in a middle school composition? The essay does not depend on the question. For a 60-point essay, you can get at most a dozen points.

Chapter 17, Boss, you are awesome! Come on, okay? What a drama. What's going on, boss? Why does the word boss appear? Is the author happy? Your protagonist's psychology says that the boss can do it, and even if the protagonist says it, it feels okay, but when Shino says it, wow, it's very inconsistent when you think about it.

The author's writing is great, but I hope to see the readers' point of view: I saw Chapter 10. In Chapter 10, the author revealed the outline and the details of the rebellion. I can think about it a little bit. As a rebellion on the surface of the Hyuga separation, it can be replaced by obtaining the Tsangigan and using it to control the puppet. It is similar to the more advanced Shoten no Jutsu, let your stand-in make a name in the black market and then join. It is not appropriate to join and then wash your hands. Also, since he is a swordsman, he hopes that other acquired abilities can serve the purpose of using the sword and gain better ways to use it. In the end, since the protagonist is a cheerful and enthusiastic person (this was also my initial opinion, and this is also my opinion that the protagonist should not join or join Akatsuki directly), I hope that he will be able to follow through in the future. If there is a female protagonist, this can also be a reason to like the male protagonist. I hope the author can refer to it, and finally I wish this book will get better and better.

Let me tell you something. Chapter 13 said Orochimaru might like you. Don't be joking. The branch family has a curse seal and they like you. A waste of time and effort. (I just don't want the author to find trouble, so I force him to say that Orochimaru is attracted to the protagonist.)

After Hatake Kakashi acquired the Sharingan, he decisively gave up the Hatake family's sword skills. Is it because the Sharingan was better than the sword skills? Doesn't White Fang still defeat most Uchihas? The reason for giving up on swordsmanship is because knowing everything means not being strong at anything. The protagonist already has Li Bai's swordsmanship. Spending energy on studying ninjutsu is basically throwing watermelons and picking sesame seeds.