A Firm Beyond Dimensions

At the beginning, I looked at it quite interestingly, and the water flowed slowly, until that part, when I took C. C to help Yuki, what kind of hoarse growl, what kind of Yuan Man laughed, Yuan Man laughed? Maybe my understanding is a little different. The protagonist is not such a cheerful person, right? He shouldn't be a deep and thoughtful person, right? Why is this happening? As far as I'm concerned, I feel it's baffling. I can't figure out why it's so emotional. The protagonist should be slightly introverted, occasionally speaking very seriously, being a bit coquettish in front of people I know, with a personality that's a bit easy to coax, and has a strong tolerance. Would such a person scream when he saw Yuki lying on the hospital bed? Even if it was uncomfortable, it shouldn't be a roar. This didn't fit my three views. It was a bit uncomfortable, so I jumped over. Then I saw that Yuki was still thinking about Kirito Asuna even though her life was on the verge of death. I was also very touched and felt a sore feeling in my nose. But why are you laughing, protagonist? I'm surprised. I really don't understand your laughter. Doesn't it overthrow all the previous characters at once? When I am moved, when you laugh here, I feel like you are crazy. People passing by tell me if there is another plot like this later? If you don't have it, I'll continue watching it. If you have it, forget it. I don't really like this style.

Will there be RWBY? It's a pity that Sister P died and Yang's arm was broken.

The writing is really good, the writing is not a noob, the plot is good, and the fact that the male protagonist does not force a harem is really great, I will order one and give my support to the author

I hope the next guest is from JOJO. The endings of both Golden Wind and Stone Sea were too tragic. I want a good ending. And Akechi from Persona, how could the Phantom Thieves of Hearts be without him?

When I saw the title of the latest chapter, I thought my favorite Reiner had finally arrived... My copywriting eye... When will I see you appear in the novel...

Um... Why is volume 4 coming after volume 2? Is it simply a wrong version, or something?

The author is great, I think, both are in the second dimension, without adding some Chinese elements, I think "Zhenhun Street", "Quiba", "Fox Demon Little Matchmaker" and other books may have a stronger sense of substitution, and the power system in it will also have an effect on the subsequent plot development.

I hope the author writes Your Name and Weathering with You

Regarding the magic ban, I'm a little worried about the future.

I saw this book in a limited edition, and I couldn't help but feel displeased with some of my comments and suggestions. If the author doesn't like reading these things, just think I'm talking nonsense. To be honest, I'm quite disappointed. It's not as good-looking as Buyers' Club, and it doesn't have the flavor of No. 8 Pawnshop. I still need to think carefully about the characterization. The two-dimensional characters in the book actually don't have the right personalities. If there is a novel version of the original anime, the author should look at the novel version of the original anime, such as Sword Art Online. Can be drawn more precisely. The plot is draggy and a bit watery. However, in terms of two-dimensional classification, it is relatively ok... After all, most two-dimensional authors are not very good at writing and plot characterization. This work is considered above average. It's me who is too harsh. Maybe I saw someone in the comments saying it was a bit like a buyer's club, so I naturally jumped in. If I didn't have such preconceived ideas, it should be pretty good. There are also fewer poisonous points, and there are no unreasonable settings from other two-dimensional writers. Many two-dimensional writers, I suspect, have never seen those anime at all, so they just include a bunch of settings, which is really embarrassing. The author of this book should have done some research.                     In fact, the best writing, story telling, and characterization of Qidian should be the group of big guys in the historical division and the Xianxia division. Buyers Club is a very good boutique in recent years. Since this book uses the settings of No. 8 Pawn Shop and Buyers Club, I think the author of this book should work hard to write it down, hoping to see good writing and characterization in some of the later chapters. Consider carefully. Finally! Come on, I hope the author can work hard to write a book and create another masterpiece! ! !

From Mr. Li, the second master to now the second master of God has been chasing him, come here to support the traitor

This protagonist is really too weak. He has not made any progress for a long time. Others become weak when they are a little stronger. Especially the Thor of Marvel. He wants to bow down to Thor and Odin. He should have a little respect, but he should not lick and kneel like this. When Hela asked him to kneel down, he immediately knelt down in a "big" shape. He didn't know shame at all and at least had some self-esteem. Such a protagonist is a bit annoying.

Well, the first guest, Lelouch, is, how should I say, very... Classic... Until about three or four years ago, there were endless fanfics about Lelouch. Then I don't know when it started. The two-dimensional dimension has changed from a niche to a popular one. "Elders" such as Lelouch, the leader, the cute god, and Ling Boli have been almost forgotten by the fandom because they cannot attract the readers who have entered the trap in recent years. Many people may miss seeing Lelouch written by the traitor... However, from "Pawnshop No. 8" And "Trafford Buyers Club", there seem to be only so many operations that can be carried out in novels with themes such as "The Firm", and there are many related to the second dimension. I remembered the "Traveler Agency" written a long time ago... Lelouch was also written in it, and in fact, this was the first thing I thought of when I saw the title "Traveler". When writing about Lelouch, I have to write about C. C., Code Geasa Akasha Records, World War, Sakura Stone, the goddess of love F. L. E. I. J. A., Various operations, normal direction, Honkai direction, funny direction, ability The operations that come to mind have almost been written by predecessors. The traitor should not be so routine. Let's take a look at the subsequent operations. In short, I am looking forward to a 😁. Come on, the traitor 😆 ——Quotation content👇

To be honest, the plot is okay, but the protagonist's growth is too slow. After more than half of the book, the protagonist is still a weakling. If you enter a new world, you will be stronger than most passers-by, and you may not be able to beat the stronger protagonist, let alone the villain. This makes the protagonist a bit low-key every time, which is quite uncomfortable. I have the nerve to say that the second place in the student city has an empty treasure mountain that I don't know how to use. Compared with you, it is a small coal mine at best, or a poor mine. You are a vibranium mine

The protagonist's character is the only bad point of this book. The more I read, the more embarrassing it becomes. It doesn't have any advantages, but there are still a lot of shortcomings... You can't use the power even if you have it.

I originally wanted to give up the book when I saw that the forced wood escape was tied with Tony, who was in about 3-4 states of Mark in "Iron Man 2". Later, the traitor said that it was a pretense of a tie, so I came back to read it, and after reading a few chapters, I saw the protagonist + Lulu Xiu was suppressed by CC using Obito's IQ, and Mao, a disgusting piece of trash in the original novel, actually used the ridiculous excuse of "witches are not heartless" to not kill them... Young master, just continue to be such a literary youth, and I will never see you again.

Personal opinion When I read novels, I am very particular about a mental mysophobia (only when I read novels, it does not exist in real life. For example, when I read novels, I cannot accept the over-contact pas de deux between the protagonist's girlfriend and her dance partner) So when I read this novel, after CC came out I was thinking about more than 1,000 years ago. Not to mention ** about the plot of selling meat in anime. It has been read hundreds of times by others Of course, this is just a serious mental disorder when I read novels Sometimes I don't recommend it, but if it is a single heroine, I care about the purity of the heroine. So when I saw CC having an affair with the protagonist, I was thinking, Why does this kind of woman always think of herself as very important? It's always about what he can give me He doesn't know anything. Especially when the protagonist gives her love back It's not worth it. She is a very unclean woman. Why can't the protagonist think of other ways to help her but insists on doing it himself It makes me look very embarrassed. Sympathy is sympathy. But as a person who reads novels with severe mental mysophobia, I can't help but think about the purity of this heroine. Alas_

How should I put it? It feels like the more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes.

If you really want to say that among the later villains, Obito was the most heinous. Madara only entrusted Obito with the prepared Eye of the Moon plan, but it was Obito who actually implemented and completed it. As for Nagato and Kabuto, let alone it. Anyway, Nagato's super reincarnation was born to redeem his actions to the greatest extent. The person whose outlook on life is most shattered or even exploded is undoubtedly Obito. Nagato's parents died in Konoha, and the most important friend in his life died in Konoha. It is reasonable to want to destroy Konoha, and the tailed beast nuclear bomb plan is also more realistic. At least it is more reasonable than the Eye of the Moon plan, and not as sick as the Eye of the Moon. Obito's logic of destroying the whole world when the goddess Obito dies is really difficult for people to understand, and he even ruined his mentor's family with his own hands. According to his divine logic, it was a heinous crime for the fourth generation not to serve as a 24-hour bodyguard for his goddess. And then, such a character with a broken outlook on illness was finally forgiven by the prince, and even became the object of respect for the prince. It was... Your father and mother fainted in the toilet from crying. If anyone has a more distorted outlook on life, the only one who can forgive him and regard him as an idol is the Uzumaki Tree Man. (To be honest, Hinata didn't even slap Naruto, and she has a good temper)

It feels like the main character has no brains and some of the plots are so disgusting.

After reading the second volume, I feel that the protagonist is the same as the agency. He obviously doesn't have much ability but is trying to pull the skin off. The agency has no ability except time travel. The tasks in the initial stage of the story are basically the protagonist's own inability to do it. The protagonist's introduction to the agency is to realize the wish. The protagonist and the agency are very conflicted. How can the protagonist and the agency realize the wish if neither the protagonist nor the agency has the ability? So Orochimaru appeared, but Orochimaru, who has full scientific research qualifications, is not omnipotent. He has to tear down the south wall to make up for the west wall and seek plug-ins. Moreover, the protagonist does not have much brain power and strength but is always on guard against Orochimaru. It is impossible to use people with suspicion and use people with suspicion. Having the same problem of "trust" as the Third Hokage, and with the protagonist's ability and brainpower unable to guard against Orochimaru, the author might as well just use Zheng Zha as the protagonist, leave all the mental research to Chu Xuan, and be free to be the practical person who raises questions and takes action.

😅 The protagonist is still so good now, isn't he afraid that the devil will hack his way in along the line? Shincheonji WarningJPG

How should I put it, the plot is still too bland, there are no explosive points, and there are no dangers along the way, calm and smooth. I feel that now everyone has discarded a lot of things that novels should have in order to take care of readers' enjoyment. On the contrary, I really want to see the unyielding struggle to survive in a desperate situation, and the tricks between chess and opponents. Can the final attributes of two-dimensional fans still not be able to escape the word "daily"?

I don't understand what the latest chapter is trying to express. Is it pity to have a harem? C. C has experienced more things than the people the protagonist has ever met, so why should the protagonist pity her? Don't know what it means

I really don't like the protagonist's character, I'm so cowardly.

Is there any use in getting CC here? Starting a harem? Boringớ ₃ờ

This author likes to let the protagonists of other books become the boss in the book. He tortures the protagonist throughout the trial, opens a big account and uses invincible power to abuse others, and also calls the protagonist immature. Please read with caution.

I'm so stupid. Can you please mention which world the character is from after each character appears? Just because you are familiar with it, the author, doesn't mean we are also familiar with it, okay?

I just want to say that this is a waste place, except for those who travel through and extract waste, they cannot be in the waste place.

Newcomer asking for help, wondering if this book is a harem? The starting point has become a temple.