The Legend of Emperor Li Yun

The author's writing style is very good, and it can be seen that he has a strong foundation in literature and history. He is a few steps ahead of those authors who write brilliant articles! But what about if you are new to writing? The layout is a bit dense, which can easily cause visual fatigue. It is recommended to divide it into paragraphs frequently. Moreover, the opening text is too official, which makes people feel like they are reading a history book, which is not in line with the fast-food nature of online articles. Maybe some humorous language can be added. 😜 Just take a look at your comments. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.