Superstar's Legend of Immortality

In fact, I personally feel that with the author's writing skills, there is no need to add some routines, such as the tenant and the landlady. I feel like vomiting after reading too much. As an entertainment article with creative ideas, why not develop into cultivating immortality and entertainment. Using some routines will easily make people abandon the book. It is embarrassing to read.

I would rather sit on a ten-color horse and cry than sit on a one-color horse and laugh! !

Yes, the black store should have stopped earlier and stopped when it was necessary.

The protagonist talks too much and doesn't look like an expert who has practiced spiritual practice for 500 years. Suggestion: Don't be a saint bitch. The relatives of soldiers who died will be supported by the country. Do more things that are beneficial to yourself. Talk less nonsense, do more practical things, live well for yourself first, and then take care of others. You should have your own private space. It's right to like making money, and don't get involved in other people's lives easily. The mother and daughter have their own lives, what does it mean if you go in? Savior? The taker? Have you ever thought about how other people's wives feel?

I just read it, and the first chapter was the type I was looking forward to, but the second and third chapters made me a little worried. I think it is understandable to inherit the cause and effect, but it is not unlimited. You have to know that you are you, and the original owner is the original owner. You need to understand the priorities, and the protagonist's so-called helping comrades to take care of their families gave me the feeling that I treat you as a brother, but you give people the rhythm of sleeping with other people's sisters and wives. What is the situation?

Author, I haven't been paying attention to you for about half a month, why did you stop updating again? Can you hold on?

Well, not only is the introduction and content different, but also the second chapter is about immortality, right? Why is the life span exhausted? Does the author have any misunderstanding about longevity? Be more rigorous

I feel like I've read similar content in the first chapter, but that was a long time ago? ? ? (Creating a sense of time and space confusion)

Not bad, well written. As an old bookworm, I think it's very good, but there are too few updates. I hope there will be more. I give you all the votes.

Can you make hundreds of thousands in one breath like in the book?

In order to make movies, make armors, create martial arts, and study science,,,,,,,,,, in the end, civilization is promoted by filming

See you again when we have written a million words. Farewell

The author, please note that your type of novel has 🔥 potential, and what you write is fine, but your update is a bit awkward. If you want to develop in this area, you'd better pay attention, update reasonably, arrange your time reasonably, update the story, and the corresponding results will be good. In this era, no one can succeed casually, work hard!

To be honest, the book is good, but the updates during the new book stage must be stable. Otherwise, you will be disappointed when everyone waits until they gain weight before reading. The new book can be updated once or twice, but the main thing is to be stable!

Why do people want to live forever? I think it's just to live a better life and protect the people who are important to them. When you reach the top, if you don't have the people you care about anymore, what can you do? Do those things day after day. When you have tried everything, what will it be like?

Can you finish the last book first?