League of Legends: Chasing the Wind

To be honest, this is one of the few high-quality League of Legends fan fiction I have read. The writing is really great! And the author has a very detailed understanding of each character's background story. The connections between the various chapters are also very smooth, and there is no harem like ordinary novels. There is absolutely no poisonous point in the emotional line, and the protagonist, as an original character, can be very harmoniously integrated into the background of the League of Legends story, which is really good.

My stomach started to feel a little aching, and the writing was really good . This book recommends not writing about the protagonist being unparalleled. The protagonist's own strength and the war plot should serve the protagonist and their story. Pretending to slap people in the face doesn't feel applicable here. Please, author, must keep writing! Please don't write YY cool articles, it doesn't matter if you are slow, emotions and stories are the most important! It is recommended to write a side story (making sugar)

I quite liked this book, but it was before the "Walking in Noxus" volume. This volume is so messy, so messy. It feels like Julian is traveling, special events can be triggered wherever he goes, and the content of the events is also very messy, too sloppy (the content itself, the author's writing style, technique, etc. Have nothing to do with it), and it is written without purpose. It feels like I am writing whatever comes to mind. The beginning of the triggering event is also very messy, which makes the general environment of Noxus not only unintuitive, but also looks messy. I have also been paying attention to what the author says after each chapter. What the author wants to express is completely different from what he writes. It feels like all his thoughts are spent on the narration of the content of the story, and there is no focus on the structure of the story itself. Julian's character also begins to become chaotic in this volume. It feels very intuitive that his image is a blend of your thoughts at every moment in each previous chapter, and his behavior is constantly changing, which leads to the development of the story being weird. I don't know what I am looking at later, which is very strange. Moreover, Julian's relationship with the heroines in the later period became increasingly weird compared to the early stage. The meeting and parting with Katarina, and the meeting and parting with Akali were all sudden and confusing, and the connection was very strange. Also, that is to say, there are thousands of female protagonists, but the male protagonist is eternal? The emotional aspect is handled very carefully, but this is not the reason why the male protagonist is still in chapter 1k. Finally, let me emphasize, the author! ! Pay attention to the structure of the story. I would say intuitively, you can see that you are working hard, but the reality is that some of the places where you work hard are just water. Filling the article to the brim may look terrible, but it can really be seen that you are working hard. Also, Julian can't really be a eunuch! ?

Regardless of the plot, the writing alone is good, the article quality is high, there are many details, especially the emotional changes, the plot is also interesting, the characters are well portrayed, I hope to continue to read more. 🙂

I really like this book by the author. I hope the author can stick to it.

It's beautiful, but why isn't it popular?

Come on, author! It started again

I feel that the protagonist's first entry into the Freljord was poorly written. Did he still remember that he was a young boy? He should have gone to find reinforcements later, preferably with a scarred appearance, and used the pig woman's attack as an excuse to delay Demacia's troops supporting Ashe, hoping that the pig woman would kill the prince.

However, I support the harem. I am a harem party 🤫. As long as the story is reasonable and reasonable, the harem has no real meaning. I still quite like to watch this kind of Shura scene~(￣▽￣~)~

300,000. Come on, gold will always shine!

It's pretty good, `▽´๑)۶, if it's well organized `▽´๑)۶, it's a good work if it's not messy, and the writing is not bad. I personally recommend abbreviating some unimportant things, and you can take them directly with you in one go. If this detail is useful, you must connect it well. So far, it's pretty good. And it is recommended not to have a harem, because the harem has been badly written, and many people don't like it now. The current emotional handling is a relatively big pit, and if it is handled well, it will be a relatively complete bitter love drama. If it is not handled well, it will be a rotten fruit, which is not a good thing. This mainly depends on your outline and writing style. If you follow your own ideas, I believe you will get a good result. (●'◡'●)ﾉ❤ Here I also wish the author a happy New Year and good luck in the Year of the Pig (◦'∪ˉʃƪ )

I really can't stand it anymore. To be honest, the first part is okay, but the second part is ugly when the protagonist meets Riven who is not dead. He has to encounter that kind of almost nonsensical trouble. He also loses his memory, loses his power, and some kind of evil spirit. The most fearful thing about writing is that the author is enjoying himself. The most annoying thing about reading this kind of novel is that the protagonist loses his power and memory inexplicably.

To be honest, you, the author, is the first book I have ever bought. . . 😭

The protagonist has no sense of responsibility, and there will be no consequences for provoking people. In his description, he seems to be very single-minded, as if if he loses Riven, he will lose the whole family, but in action, he can fall in love with anyone as long as he is beautiful 🙂 Isn't it disgusting? You might as well have a real harem instead of a fake harem + eunuch protagonist + fake single heroine, and all kinds of debuffs

I haven't seen the subscription yet, but after reading some comments, is there still a virgin harem genre in the world? Damn it, the world is so big and full of wonders. Finally, it is outrageous that the son of a veteran is a virgin and refuses to grow up. Of course, the emotional scene is indeed good, but a virgin harem, is this a plot that carbon-based creatures can come up with?

Attention new comers, pig-footed natives, I'm leaving now

Let's put it this way, I have the same feeling about this novel, it's worthless, tasteless, and a pity to discard.

I finished reading it, I originally read it as a eunuch book, but I didn't expect that the author suddenly cheated yesterday If the author really doesn't want to give up, then I have some suggestions, I hope you can consider it The beginning of this book, to Dema, to Ionia, to the world runes, to the void, to Shurima Personally, there is no problem! ! As a harem novel, the emotional characters are even pretty good, especially in the early stages The only ones who are a little anxious are Sylvie and the second lady in Shurima But that's not a problem The problem is, what happens after Shurima It's just one thing, it's too much, and it's to the point of breaking the point. . Since the second lady turned into a snake girl, Carter rejected the protagonist because of marriage, and the protagonist returned to Noxus. It almost collapsed As long as you continue as you did when you first returned to Nok, you only need to continue to revolve around Noxus, revolve around Swain's actions, and create an uprising➕emotional drama around Carter and the second lady, and you will be able to come back But the author was too greedy and ran out again. . . . Even in Noxus, the forcibly added Karthus seems very useless. You said that it is useful to pave the way for the later stage, but it is useless, because you may not get to the later stage if you continue like this Repeatedly, again and again, look at the author's update time, whether it is actual affairs or Raven, it proves that you can no longer pave the way for new stories You must start filling in the holes! ! The foreshadowing is really good. There are foreshadowings, enemies, the emotions of the female protagonist, and future imaginary enemies: the aging Noxus/Void/Shurima Whether it is now, the middle and late stages, or the later stages, there is no need to worry about writing But, you really should start filling in the holes! ! ! ! Remember! It's about filling holes, not covering old holes with new holes! As an author, constantly imagining new plots is equal to endless greed Otherwise, all the pits in front of you will be graves It is a pity, it is really a pity You must slim down your structure, Finally, when If you keep interrupting, you will be messed up My personal suggestion is to delete the article and contact the editor. Start with the story of the protagonist returning to Noxus and meeting Akali. Delete the rest and continue writing from helping Akali and Swain What if you take a slight detour to Ionia? Pull too much, you really can't finish writing, and you can't write well Refine the plot you have laid out, and fill in the holes immediately. Even if you make the climax more and a little boring, it will be better than turning into a foot binding (already almost turning into a foot binding) It only represents my personal opinion, because this is really a pretty good novel among alliance and harem novels Since you cheated, try to change it After all, change is a good thing

You have to write some small tragedies for Riven and the protagonist. Have Riven and the protagonist lost their minds? In Demacia, a spy was so carefree. He kept talking about Ariven but he went around flirting with girls and even got together with Carter. In Ionia, a soldier who was influenced by the iron-blooded spirit of Noxus had a negative IQ. Desire to atone? Thinking about atonement before the war is over? Are you embarrassed to watch the plot yourself? The author should not flatter himself or flatter himself when writing a book. Since he has the background of LOL, he should write according to his background, or else he should re-create a world view. Those who watched it felt angry and nauseated.

Let's just change the male protagonist's name to Qianzhang Virgin Liu Xiahui

This work is slow-burning and may not be to the taste of some people. But in my opinion, it is a good article as far as works are concerned. As for the author, he is a good author who knows how to persevere. From the author's autobiography, I feel that he likes the heroic spirit of going to a meeting alone in martial arts, the flirtatious but loving love, and the unrestrained and unstoppable feeling of one person killing the world with one sword. Overall, I see a sense of martial arts in this. It suits my taste very well. Come on, author.

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Most fans of the popular League of Legends have read it, and it seems that this article is the best one, and the author has been able to persist for so long. I really admire it, and I will give you a 5,000-point reward. I am also writing a novel of the same type... I have published nine chapters in three months, and the writing is poor 😭😭😭 To be honest, I see you writing so fast and your writing can be so good, I am really desperate. If possible, I would like to know how you developed your writing skills and when will I be able to be as good as you 🙂🙂🙂

Will there be an end day?

Come back and look at it. I watched it in high school now that I have graduated and started working. I really liked the plot with Lux at the time, but unfortunately now I just become a character who stacks up murder books.