
Traveling Through Another World with the Two-Dimensional Lottery System
带着二次元抽奖系统穿异界
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 100k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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53Chapters
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By the way, Gui Yanha has never used a hatchet... She is from the city, where did she get a hatchet? Ryugu Reina uses a hatchet, but Gui Yanha uses a saw. She is good at Iai chops, and she wants it to be light, but the hatchet is too heavy... And I have to say that Gui Yanye does love Brother Cheng deeply. There is no plot in each bad Ending where Gui Yanye kills Brother Cheng. In addition to committing suicide, he is killing the world. On the contrary, in the bad Endings of the world, there are not only examples of killing Brother Cheng. There are also different ways to kill Yan Ye, whether Brother Cheng is on the spot and whether Brother Cheng is involved in the murder... To sum up, although Gui Yanye is quite jealous, he is still one of the few good kids left in the series. Brother Cheng aside, no matter what the ending of the world is in the later stage, it cannot be said that he is not a good boy, but at least he feels that he deserves to lose, and he is not worthy of being happy if he wins.
After reading it, tell me your thoughts.
Let's talk about the advantages first: ... Thinking about it carefully, there are no advantages worth mentioning. I can only say "it's easy to watch" But it does belong to the "hay" level that can be watched. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. Narrative writing style. This is probably the author's first time writing, and the plot almost relies on character dialogue. If the author pays attention to other excellent novels, he will find that they are full of side descriptions. The author may have written this book with a "self-pleasure" nature, but he still hopes to think more from the readers' perspective. 2. The main line is unknown. Until Chapter 55, the main plot is still unclear. It seems that the author is planning to engage in a continental war, but he cannot escape the relaxed campus life. 3. Fan of power system. At the beginning, magic was still based on advanced mathematics, and the protagonist's advanced mathematics scores surpassed other worlds. But later on, this setting disappeared. There is also a lottery system. . . This is basically a sheep's head hanging out, just a gimmick. The author should determine it as soon as possible - what is the source of the protagonist's power? 4. Transition. The author adds a lot of external future supporting roles to campus life. But on the one hand, this transition is too abrupt and lacks a time or geographical identifier. On the other hand, too little information was given. In a sense, it would be better to show up later and explain the origin through memories. But the specific details still need to be determined by the author. I still prefer this relaxed atmosphere and will continue to follow up. I wish the author will get better as he writes more! Above
Interesting collection of two-dimensional props
As the title says, we are collecting interesting two-dimensional props. It doesn't have to be too strong, mainly because we want it to be interesting 😄😄 If possible, it will be added to the novel😁😁 The format is as follows Item name: Item effect: Item description: