Ragnarok of Faith

I heard that it is now popular to reward authors of excellent comments, so I will follow suit. It's not as much as one hundred yuan, just fifty soft girl coins for one essential comment. There are no specific format requirements, as long as you are careful, there is no need to brag or criticize without thinking. Anyway, there is no fairness at all, the standard is what I like, hahaha. I also want to be willful, for an indefinite period of time, until my wallet can no longer bear it. The final struggle of a desperate author.

Haha, I was successfully milked to death by a squid

The rituals from Sequence 1 to Sequence 0 are so terrifying

I heard that this is the first book I have written, and I feel pretty good about it. It just feels tight, tight, tight. In the three consecutive negatives, the IQ is not online, the logic is confusing, the settings are unreasonable, and there is no strong poisonous point. It has won many authors. After reading 5 chapters, there are very few novels that I didn't want to complain about, and they are basically excellent works. Let's talk about the shortcomings 1. The various settings are much weaker than the high-quality products, and the ideas feel rushed. 2. The characteristics of the protagonist are too ordinary, not magical characteristics, but the world view and thoughts. You can't distance yourself from other characters. The exaggeration of the complaint is that if you write about changing the protagonist, no one will probably notice it 3. It is still a character, but it is a supporting role. I have basically seen all kinds of supporting roles and now I think they are background characters. It's the kind of wawawa standing behind you in the game. Supporting characters in high-quality novels can become protagonists in side stories. Every chapter of those ridiculous novels is a wonderful interaction between the behavior and psychology of the protagonist and a large number of supporting characters. 4. Basically, 2 chapters are updated every day. If readers cannot find interesting points to appreciate in every 2 chapters of the day, it will basically fail. Because it's already the next day for the next chapter. If it is like this for a long time and continuously, you know 🙂 Speaking of which, as long as one of the points 1, 2 and 3 can be wonderful, which one is not a masterpiece that people can recall the fun of it? Is it 🙂

That, I just want to see when you become a eunuch 🙂

A brief review, not necessarily correct, you can use it as a reference, the author, please don't hit me, haha 1. Behind the work The author should not write books for life, or at least not for life. Compared with many writings that are "strongly utilitarian and purposeful", I personally think it has a natural advantage in mentality. The author should be a person with rich social experience and a successful career (even if modestly speaking, he is at least a small success), so the logic, rationality, and storytelling embodied in this book are absolutely above the standard. 2. An unbreakable foundation: setting and conception This is a fantasy novel of "Western fantasy + strong oriental elements". This kind of novel is rare on the market, and it is even rarer to write it well. The combination of the real world and the dream world is very interesting. The various sites in the dream world are also very interesting. Western names, atmospheres, prayer techniques, etc., Combined with Yue Buqun and the star-absorbing method... Okay, don't follow me. If you encounter this situation, you will just say "fuck"! Of course, the more complex and interesting the setting, the higher the challenge to the author. You can feel that the author has a very grand story in his mind. Write it slowly and logically, but don't make it come true. It is also commendable that the setting of ability promotion is very strict. Personally, I think the power system is probably as strong as an iron barrel and will not collapse. 3. Writing skills related Internet articles do not have high requirements for "literary talent", but they still have certain requirements for "writing skills". Personally, I think the entry-level requirement is "telling the story clearly". The author clearly exceeds this standard. As for how much more , benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom, and there is no way to argue. If I give it a hundred percent, my overall score is 79. Occasionally there will be drama, and occasionally there will be a stroke of genius. Generally speaking, it is suitable to calm down and watch line by line. It is definitely inappropriate to use the one-view-ten-line method of watching more "self-pleasure elements". This is also related to the general background of "Western Fantasy". You can't say "wtf" or "what?" To yourself from time to time, as that will ruin the overall atmosphere. It can be seen that the author puts great care into every word and sentence. 4. Plot related It has a decent beginning. It can only be said that it is a pity to be persuaded to quit at the beginning. The subsequent plot gradually unfolds, and you can judge for yourself. The plot is reasonable, reversal, and unexpected. I will give it a score of about 80 points. 5. Complaints Regarding the fighting, I almost cried. I beg you, the author, please spend some time learning how to write fights! The time invested is definitely worth it! Objectively speaking, this fantasy novel is not about food or entertainment. It cannot avoid fighting, but this unspeakable fight... I know very well this feeling of being unable to hold it back. Let me tell you about my painful experience: I have read the most books by the great master Yan Yu Jiangnan, so I selected and pasted some of the fighting scenes written by Yan Nan to experience the big story. How did God write? The Great Hero Who Boiled the Sea into Wine is very good at writing fights, so I pasted them down and studied them. I also downloaded a lot of martial arts books and bought some martial arts books (unfortunately, I read few of them). I also watched action movies, sometimes watching frame by frame the action of the two sides fighting during the fight (such as a surprise attack). I also looked up on the Internet to see how to write fights. These are the basic methods. The result is that readers evaluate my book. The basic evaluation is that the fighting is particularly well written (ahem... Just to cheer myself up). To improve the fighting style, here are three suggestions for the author's situation: First, do a good job in action design and have smooth fighting scenes in mind; second, improve the fighting style and accumulate more professional vocabulary; third, use onomatopoeia such as puff, blood, etc., What you see, inner thoughts, etc. To explain the awesomeness of the villain or the awesomeness of the protagonist. Personally, what I think is taboo is chatting while fighting. The tension is all gone. So I won't give any points for the fighting part. On the whole, personal food, if the combat is well written, it is food+. Finally, the above is purely my personal opinion, please forgive me if there is anything wrong! I don't forgive you... Follow the network cable and hit me! 😚

Came here from my best friend to celebrate hahaha

The green mountains are falling and the peaks are steep, and the young people in the small town are frustrated. Let's go to the rivers and lakes with wine and swords, and I am willing to do it for the sake of friendship and not for fame.

Sure enough, he is a eunuch. I have been raising him to this day, and I saw that eunuchs can also follow this style.

Has the author succeeded in escaping from poisonous milk???

Why did you stop updating? It's not good to serve the emperor in the palace.

Originally, I had seen too much martial arts and didn't want to see anymore, so I came to this fantastic fantasy. It's both Taishan's and Dugu's. It's a conflict of styles. I don't like this kind of thing the most. 🙏 slipped away.

Coming from Cuttlefish, it looks pretty good.

A sword weighs 27 kilograms... It's too poisoned by the novel. If you want to learn from Jin Yong's system, don't create your own pre-set settings... Linghu Chong didn't learn anything about lightness, weight, and slowness when he learned Dugu Nine Swords.

I heard it was sacrificed? 😠

No more running away, you are a yuppie with poisonous milk of squid!

The Lord of Best Friends came here to let the author experience the power of squid.

When the weather is cold in winter, grease tends to solidify but still float on the water. This is common sense. Chapter 58: Dreaming "Although oil floats on the water, when it solidifies when exposed to cold, it solidifies before water. The solidified oil has a specific gravity greater than water and will sink. Therefore, when the oil-water mixture solidifies, the oil is below instead of above, so you don't have to worry about the sparks falling from my torch igniting the fuel." Joanna glanced at Richard with disdain, "This is all from the general knowledge class, you haven't remembered it."

Will the boss be updated again? Can Richard still be reunited?