Rebirth of the Elves

There was a mistake in Chapter 6. Ji Yuan became Ji Fei. I wonder if it can be changed back.

Oh, no. The author can do without Long Aotian. But it won't work if you write your own elf to die. So, it won't work the way you wrote it.

In fact, there are several shortcomings. The relationship between a protagonist and his father is good and bad at times. The second protagonist doesn't have absolute strength, but he has to show off. There's a price to pay for showing off, and in the end he probably killed his own elf. 🤭🤭

Isn't the evolution condition for sun elves and moon elves that their intimacy reaches a certain level and then they evolve during the day or night?

The green onion duck is of the normal type, and the shadow ball is invalid.

The Banjila on your cover looks a bit like a replica of that one.