Hell Portal

Hostess, I still hope that Yu Jie will be better 😄

Come on, but to be honest, bugs and logic are somewhat lacking For example, skydiving and guns, these things that most people can't touch, can be directly understood and lack description Things that shouldn't be described, such as giving money, etc., Are there I hope to see great progress. I have invested There is also the update rate, at least two chapters a day Come on

The setting of the chicken-eating plot in Chapter 2 is really good, but it seems to have less to do with the game. Chapter 3 feels like the pace of the plot suddenly slowed down. I won't comment until it is finished, but I feel that the author's writing is gradually taking shape. Wait and see.

The writing is pretty good, please keep updating.

Come back, the writing is really good