The First Big Boss

I feel like the book is pretty good, but why are there so few people? Isn't it much better than the so-called leader in the rankings?

Good books need to be collected and promoted.

Yes, after reading more than ten chapters, I got the feeling of martial arts. I hope there won't be nuclear weapons flying around in the later period... That's not called martial arts, it's called fairy tales.

The development of the sect was well written, but suddenly it went off the mark, and I was still criticized everywhere.

In the latest chapters, the protagonist is either forced into plotting or talking to others about a lot of nonsense. It's obviously a martial arts novel, so write a martial arts story well and don't talk too much about irrelevant things. I'm not interested. I just want to read interesting martial arts novels, and don't want to read the author's preaching. If you want to write about the growth of the protagonist, please show it through the plot. Don't let the protagonist and supporting characters talk all the time. This is so boring

The writing is great. It's good that the protagonist is on par with Master Yue. He has a thick face and a dark heart. If he hadn't gone astray in one step, Master Yue might not have been the one who had the last laugh.

Is this protagonist a fool? Recruiting gangsters and gangsters to get started? Is the ruffian your brother or your son? Speechless, no wonder I rush to the street~

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After reading Chapter 20, it is actually good, but I feel very tired. The author has a good idea and wants to reflect the ancient style of martial arts in writing, but because his own ability is not up to it, it is a bit nondescript, which makes readers very tired.

I've read a few chapters and it's pretty good. It feels like a martial arts novel.

Your updates are too slow, it's not enough to watch.

I feel like the content is a little bit random, with no main plot.

I haven't read the book yet. There are very few such books now. I recommend 9 to you.

There is nothing toxic about the book, but after reading more than 30 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, because there was nothing interesting about it.

Personally, I feel that when a sect is starting up, the first generation of disciples should be cautious and their character and qualifications should be above average.

I have never figured out what levels are behind Ming Jin, Dark Jin, and Hua Jin. Can any great person come out and explain it?

The chapter names are not very good. You can use a funny paragraph in the chapter as the name to make it more attractive.

Come on, I feel like you wrote it very well

To be honest, the reading experience of a single chapter is not good, so I have been saving a lot.

Rewards will resume next month. At the same time, I also hope that the author will appear more frequently.

I feel like I don't like the use of Ming Jin, Yu Jing, etc. To divide realms. It's not as good as the true energy in traditional martial arts to divide realms.

I saw a lot of readers complaining about it and it didn't make them feel better. It's a new book, and it feels good to have written it to this extent.

It feels like the background of Water Margin is interspersed with some things from other backgrounds, but I still like to develop the sect.

I'm a little confused. Isn't that Chen Aozhi from 36 Heroes? Why are you so weak?

Learn from Master Yue? From the palace?

This book is no different from the previous sect development novels, the same routine, the same plot, just changed the golden finger...

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