Black Iron Crown

I persisted for a long time, but in Chapter 405, I really couldn't hold on any longer. I couldn't handle the instant poisonous death. A woman killed so many people, and I almost died. In the end, I actually married her. I had vowed revenge, revenge, revenge!!! Real name licking the woman.

At first, the system was just a auxiliary tool, which was fine, but then it gradually began to fall apart. There was no logic in either the characters or the plot. You must know that history always has its own laws of development. When Golden Finger has set aside the laws of development and fights YY purely for the development of the plot, the novel has collapsed from the root. It is like playing a cheat machine when playing with a horse. It is fun for five seconds, but it is tasteless. In terms of the quality of this novel, there is no conflicting plot, no distinctive characters, and no exaggeration of the magnificent society. Reflecting on the author's words from this novel, he should be young, enthusiastic, but not mature enough in thinking, likes to play games, not patient enough, likes fantasy, has a certain education, and has the ability to read and study independently but very little. Generally speaking, he may be a high school or college student.

What is he writing? The war drama is poorly written, the emotional drama is even worse, and the territorial development policy formulation is even worse. How dare the author say that he is careful? Like a kid's book? Is your child covered in typos and plot flaws? If you have a fantasy style, you can forget about 40 to 50 percent of your army's casualties without retreating. Have you chosen a hardcore setting for yourself? Is this a British Lobster Soldier or a Medieval Omen Soldier? The top soldiers exchanged from the system formed a spear formation to kill the medieval ** soldiers and added one third of the casualties among the abandoned people? Did they commit suicide by caesarean section? The plot routine, the protagonist who was trapped in the trap, really retreated from the trap. I really don't know where the author's thoughts went. This second book is not as good as the first.

I can only say that the plot is passable, and it is normal for the system flow routine to always be like this, but the emotional line is really a failure, and the protagonist himself does not seem to be successful. The addition of the emotional line directly amplifies the protagonist's character flaws.

Can you let Mekasa go? It makes me embarrassed every time I see how the protagonist thinks about her. There is no such thing as love at first sight in the Middle Ages. It is all for profit~~ How can you, a lord, have the love of a son and daughter? What we like to watch is riding and slashing, not romance dramas at 8 o'clock in the evening. If you can't write emotional drama well, just don't write it, okay?

How is this foreign history? 😱Another world

Let's update the new book😆😆😆

I felt something was wrong when I saw Mekasa appear. Why did I have to insert such a character? The male protagonist abandoned the book after breaking up with Mekasa. In one sentence, a bloody plot of love, resentment, and hatred is forcibly staged. Wouldn't it be nice to put down the rebellion directly? Why do we have to arrange for the protagonist to have a relationship with the enemy's daughter?

The author is actually still a senior in high school. If we go forward, wouldn't it be that the author started writing books in the third year of junior high school? Np

In Chapter 43, "Rewards for Merits" cannot stand the withdrawal. The combined population of the two territories is three to four thousand. You have to seal the actual territory to those who are not loyal and contribute insufficiently. Instead of concentrating the population for production, you might as well just rely on the soldiers provided by the system to conquer the entire world. The first dozens of chapters are all about what the system wants the protagonist to do. The system is just an auxiliary. If everything depends on the system, what is the use of the protagonist? It's even more ridiculous to say that you want to be a benevolent king, but you are controlled by the moral standards of people from another world. Then when you ordered the burning, killing and looting of Jin Gong Castle, why didn't you consider the image of a benevolent king? Even if you are a tyrant, it is better than being a puppet whose thoughts are controlled by others... To sum up, actions rely on the system, and thoughts rely on others!

Emmm, the protagonist has a bad character, he is not a hero, he is greedy, lustful, indecisive, and cannot achieve great things. The real protagonist is the system, so just read it as a novice.

In the early stage, I saw a beautiful woman who couldn't walk. In the later stage, except for the protagonist and a few important supporting characters, there was no one with a brain in the entire empire.

At first I felt something was wrong, but when I thought about it carefully, it turned out that in my opinion the protagonists were either crazy, cool or dominating the world. The protagonist of this novel clearly had a golden finger, but was always unsure of himself. The author thought that the writing was called twists and turns. In fact, it is to forcefully suppress the protagonist. Since you have a golden finger, go boldly. I guess so many of them are useless. Just feel free to write it.

The cheats are too big, providing troops, food, buildings, buffs, heroes, everything. However, the opponents are just medieval natives. This is no longer cheating, it is directly modifying the game code. Without balance, there will be no sense of fun.

Feudalism means enfeoffment. If feudalism was abolished at that time, he would be overthrown by the nobles who accepted him. And it was a just reason because the feudal lord broke his oath and other knights did not have the opportunity to obtain feudalism. The author is too ridiculous. He uses the thinking and culture of Eastern people to write about the West.

Hey, this Mekasa is out again! Mentioning her just makes her sick! Did the author forget how he was criticized before? Wenqing was ill last time, will it happen again this time? Do you have to disgust people and challenge people's bottom line? Forget it, after this incident, it would be too much to let her go without killing this ***. If it doesn't work, please let her evaporate and wander around or disappear for the rest of her life after this time. (I really feel uncomfortable watching this character, but otherwise this book is okay)

Does the protagonist have some misunderstanding about the regular army? The regular army and serfs produced by the system are equally matched by the herdsmen, and they are unable to complain.

Is this the author's first time writing a book? There is a big problem with the sentences. Moreover, there are so many fragments in the newly written works. Who will dare to read your novels in the future? There are so many fragments. I can more or less accept the others. After all, other authors also have them, but your fragments make me really uncomfortable!

I can't stand it after only reading 5 pictures. Let's not talk about whether the writing is good or not. There are a lot of typos. Forget about the typos. The titles are sometimes Viscount and sometimes Earl, which all affects reading.

Not interesting. . I'm tired of seeing dozens and dozens of blind dates.

To be honest, it's not that good. The more I write about it, the worse it gets. There are so many poisonous points.

It feels so disgusting just looking at it, why do you only have a system? And as long as there is technology mentioned in the system, such as brewing, paper making, sugar making, etc., The protagonist must be a mentally retarded protagonist who knows nothing, has no common sense, does not redeem from the system, and will never do it himself. He basically does not rely on strategy to fight. It is really enough!

In the Middle Ages, it was normal and allowed to have a mistress

I would like to recommend a book called "A Riding and Cutting System with You"

No matter what, if you start writing a book in the second grade of junior high school, you will definitely succeed.

If that woman really existed in the plot of this novel, I would definitely be poisoned. This novel gave me the feeling that it was not as good as the author's Another World Riding and Cutting Journey.

The Broken Gun Under the Horse's Hoof, written by this author before, was okay. Although the development expanded quickly, it didn't have so many problems. Instead of making progress, this book is even more poisonous. One system can do everything that can be done. The protagonist is also more DS, and there is a poisonous heroine.

There are too many typos to count. In one chapter, the character's identity is sometimes called an earl, and sometimes a viscount... It's so confusing. Didn't the author even read it once after writing it? The Earl and Viscount shouldn't have made a mistake no matter how he entered it, so he decisively withdrew the book.

Please watch "The Iron Duke", please don't stop talking about it, please support me.

This writing is simply unbearable.