Konoha Koi

It's not that the writing is very good, but the writing style is also great. Is it because of pure depression that the protagonist is too stretched? I just mentioned that the protagonist has the strongest Sharingan, but later he was suppressed and beaten by the Third Raikage one-on-one. If you want to do this, you can not give the protagonist so many tricks. I just said that the tricks are awesome, but will they be weakened later? Now that we know the future, why are we always 50-50 against anyone we fight? But the writing is really good

I just finished the update 😭😭😭

After only reading two chapters, I felt there was something wrong with the character design. First of all, Madara would not let his own race kill each other for the sake of the Kaleidoscope, otherwise how could the Uchiha become a powerful clan? All of them had been killed long ago, and Itachi had no chance to appear. Secondly, it is very important for a novel to have good characterization. The protagonist and supporting characters, the positive characters and the villain BOSS are all very important. How can you read it if the characters are ruined?

I originally wanted to save more and watch it later, but I couldn't help it 💔 and it was gone again 🥺

Not enough. Not enough. Not enough. Not enough. Not enough. 🥺🥺🥺

Author, I hope you can read this comment. I have just read your excellent work. Although I have just read more than a hundred chapters, to be honest, it is very well written and excellent. Moreover, the homework and materials are sufficient, which shows that the author has worked very hard! But, can the author please stop spoiling it yourself? It may be out of some bad taste, but reading a book is like playing a puzzle game for us book friends. We gradually discovered that reading carefully is the essence of reading. From time to time, you can reveal the perspective of God, and a person with strong brainstorming ability may even guess the plot. In that case, how can we read a book that we have not read but know the plot direction? Many book friends say that spoilers affect the senses, no matter whether it is a movie, a book, or a game. If you do this, you will really lose fans and commit suicide😭😭😭

Hehe, I posted a comment about combat effectiveness but it was deleted, so I'll post it again. An Uchiha "genius" who opened up the blood-stained limits of the Mangekyou and Susanoo levels was beaten down by a third-generation Raikage who only knew Taijutsu and the blood-stained limits of a black thunder release; The protagonist awakens to Wan. When I had my kaleidoscope power, a strange phenomenon descended from the sky. Then Black Zetsu said that the eye power was comparable to that of Indra. Then I was defeated in a duel with the Third Raikage. I barely relied on my kaleidoscope power to deal with people. I really wanted to laugh when I saw it. Is this even comparable to Indra? Is Heijue out of his mind? There is also a small BOSS like the Golden Horn and the Silver Horn, which was killed by Inarika Die and the Fifth Raikage. The protagonist siblings were forced to rely on the most powerful original characters to "give their best" to defeat them. I don't know what to say. The Golden Horn and the Silver Horn are so impressive? The author told me when he was laning with me in the comment area of ​​the last post that it is not skills but people that are strong. He said that Hashirama could reach the top of the ninja world by relying on 💩 Release. I actually wanted to laugh. Isn't this exactly what I wanted to say? You gave the protagonist so many powerful abilities and then couldn't use them at all. Then to put it bluntly, wouldn't the protagonist be a waste? Is this a genius? You still have the nerve to say that even the Second Hokage may not be able to defeat him? How miserable the second generation is in this work. I can only say that the level of combat power collapse is comparable to that of Boruto, with a capital letter.

Are you updating quickly? Believe it or not, I stewed you?

Yes, I saw the first generation of disciples. The heroine is Hanabi. She is older than Hanabi's father. Grandfather and grandson are in love. It's awesome.

But within a few chapters, I realized that the author's writing style is really impressive. Not only the introduction is attractive, but the content is also. I hope it won't be too bad, and I'll send you a recommendation vote.

How to put it, I feel that Hashirama and Madara have been weakened a lot. At least Hashirama is crushing when he hits Madara. Madara hammers the Nine-Tails and glares. The Nine-Tails nickname is one against eight. Only when Madara ends up wearing Susan and adding Nine-Tails can he tie with Hashirama. The tailed beast has no status in front of the big guys like Senju Uchiha Uzumaki

A small recommendation, I wish the author will write better and better!

It was the first time I saw someone crazily cheating on the protagonist while also crazily cheating on the enemy, and then weakening the protagonist after finishing the cheating. The power system is broken.

This book shouldn't be called Konoha Koi, it should be called Konoha's Strongest Trash

After reading more than 200 chapters, I originally had a cool point. This book would be sublimated if the protagonist's five million detonating talisman exploded, and then he actually came out of Hashirama to save four Kages. This felt so uncomfortable, and once the kaleidoscope came out, it could really defeat a few Kages, unless they are stupid.

Based on the first generation, the heroine is Hinata Hanabi? ? ? A 40-year-old fucked an 8-year-old?

It's really poison. The protagonist's Kaleidoscope, Immortal Mode, Eight-door Dungeon, Magnetic Shield, Swift Shield, etc. Were stained with blood. As a result, he was violently hammered by the third generation Raikage. If you don't want the protagonist to be too strong, don't give him such a high starting point.

Naruto is also known as "Black Zetsu Splits the Breast to Save His Mother". The chest split open by his hand is of course Madara's breast. It is also called "The Rivalry of the Otsutsuki Family" and "The Story of the Eyes". It is said that "Boruto" is called "You Can Be Strong Only With Tattoos"

It gets worse and worse from now on. Forcing the villain not to die will make people's heads hurt. He also killed the famous person😅. This plot twist is really blunt. People watching are disgusted. He is a Naruto fan, and there is always an inexplicable way to be a rebellious nin. Since killing one of them is the beginning, and the author assumes that the daimyo triggers the war, then according to the protagonist's idea, shouldn't he kill all the daimyo? Forget it, no more bb. The three views are inconsistent.

After reading a few chapters, I'm just curious that Aurora is almost old enough to be Hanabi's grandfather. Grandfather and grandson love?

I call you the strongest with this nonsense. What a piece of crap.

The author writes the book for his own pleasure and does not care about the readers' opinions at all

Did the author change after chapter 400?

Can any trash come to Qidian to write a book?

I'm sorry to the author. I haven't finished my three views yet. I can't understand this kind of love between ancestors and grandchildren.

It was so uncomfortable to watch, the story line was messy, and there were so many boring battle scenes with a weak protagonist. It seems like everyone can overwhelm the protagonist. It really makes me sick to my stomach.

The content is seriously off topic. Anyway, I think the protagonist is really not lucky enough to be called a koi. Are you serious about the part about amnesia? The plot is too tacky, and in order to get together with Hanabi smoothly, there is nothing to say about setting up Hanabi's origins as a mystery and writing out all her parents. Also, is it serious that Hashirama was forced to die? She also had a temper, and she was directly written as a Madonna character. Countless people died at the hands of Hashirama during the Warring States Period. Even his childhood friends killed him when asked, which shows that he also has a bottom line. .

The real koi is the absolute emperor of Europe. There is no danger at all. Even if there is any danger, it will be resolved for no reason before the danger comes, and it can still benefit. Otherwise, it is just a little bit of shit luck.

You can also take a look at it in the early stage. Once the war starts and you invade Konoha, you can't see it. It's a mess. The enemy's and your own combat power fluctuate. The enemy is not united, as if all the ninja villages are controlled by Black Zetsu. The combat power of this Black Zetsu is simply sky-breaking. They can all control Mito Uzumaki, which is funny just thinking about it. If there was a ranking of combat power in that era, Senju Hashirama was first, Uchiha Madara was second, Uzumaki Mito was third, and Senju Tobirama and the other Kage were third and fourth. Because at that time the Kyuubi was not separated and was suppressed by Mito. He was still a top master of sealing techniques and had at least half as much chakra as a Kyuubi.

Personally, I think Hanabi is the most beautiful person in Naruto.