A Fine Father-in-Law in the Tang Dynasty

Predicted ending of the novel: In the twenty-third year of the Zhenguan era, Li Shimin became increasingly obsessed with the path to immortality. Seeing that An Xuan Gong, over a hundred years old, could still father children, he suspected him of being an immortal. When he demanded the secrets of immortality but was refused, a wicked thought took hold.

I've read a bit, and I'll finish the free chapters soon. May I share some of my thoughts? First, there's the difference between a given name and a courtesy name. Let's take Du Ruhui as an example. His surname was Du, his given name was Ruhui, and his courtesy name was Keming. He couldn't refer to himself as "Keming"; he had to refer to himself as "Ruhui." Others would address him as "Keming."

Can't the old man show off a little? Give Li Er a good beating with a flurry of wild punches.

This is the most useless system and... Protagonist I've ever seen in a book! A sixty-year mission, and you can't even have sex, and you actually tolerate it? You call yourself a great Confucian scholar? You haven't even copied a single Thousand Character Classic or Three Character Classic, and you've accomplished nothing except studying food!

You love all of Empress Zhangsun's children and want to change their fates, but you just don't help Li Chengqian. Just like Li Tai, as the author describes, Li Chengqian's character hasn't changed at all. They're all your grandsons, yet you treat them differently. And historically, Li Chengqian was indeed capable. Why did his personality change?

Seeing an 80-year-old man, and the author still wants to introduce female leads, one a teenager and the other an apprentice. It's simply perverted.

If the protagonist is a sixty-year-old man at the beginning, then don't even bother dating the female lead; it's just too unsettling.

Is this the father-in-law? This is the brother-in-law! "You marry my daughter, I'll marry your sister!" An old man in his sixties or seventies marrying a girl in her twenties—he's practically a saintly old pervert! The author must really admire Zhu Xi, right? The pleasure of raising a child must be quite something, right? Raising a girl at forty, and then ready to sleep with her at sixty! 👍

Huo Qubing acted impulsively by shooting Li Gan, but what about Li Guang's act of settling a personal score by killing the Baling Commandant? Li Guang had already violated the rules, and the Baling Commandant was merely enforcing the law. For such a small matter, Li Guang held a grudge and ultimately brought the Commandant under his command to his death.

The author didn't choose the right subject matter. The overall idea was good, but historical fiction is very detail-oriented. The fact that the author made the same mistake in all ten of the stories shows that the author knows very little about historical details. There are many other similar mistakes. Li Chengqin wasn't crippled from the beginning. Many experts know more about this than I do.