
Konoha's Strongest Substitute User
木叶最强替身使者
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 715k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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288Chapters
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I saw it in the new book recommendation today. I voted for it as soon as I saw Isaac. I also like Isaac very much. I am so tired of watching Shen Chen and Mu Qi play. It's a pity that Shen Chen doesn't play Isaac anymore and Mu Qi is cool.
A good book waiting to be released (although I haven't read jojo(ಡωಡ))
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There are many different voices and questions in the comment area... Let me tell you my personal opinion (friendly discussion + micro-science popularization, mainly for those who have never watched jojo)
Some people say that the protagonist gave away the substitute, which is the Tarot card, a little hastily, and some say that the protagonist's golden finger is gone... Let's talk about the protagonist's substitute first ⑧ Platinum Star is the substitute of the protagonist of JOJO's Bizarre Adventure, the third part of Star Fighter. Although it is a joke, Platinum Star has also been recognized by Chef Guangdu. In terms of strength, Platinum Star can shatter materials with the same hardness as diamonds, its punch speed is close to the speed of light, its eyesight can also be used as a microscope, and its ultra-high precision allows it to catch high-speed flying objects. After awakening the time-stop ability, it can cope with a variety of situations, not to mention the enhancement of the Isaac system after Beyond Heaven. Although Platinum Star is weakened now, it will be very powerful when it grows up. (Even if a group of friends wants to be a substitute) After talking about the protagonist's substitute, let's talk about why the protagonist gave away a substitute. Normally, a stand-in messenger can only have one stand-in, and this is the case for the protagonist. Tarot cards (referring to the author's book) can give people the potential or opportunity to awaken the stand-in, but they only play a supporting role for the protagonist, and only one can be used. As the author said before, the author has also thought about which card the protagonist will use. To use the author's words again (as mentioned in the book club), Konoha is equivalent to a good house (not to mention Danzo's fault). If the protagonist wants to integrate well, he does not mind paying for some substitutes who are useless to the protagonist and who the protagonist knows well. And the protagonist is not giving it away without thinking. Giving the first tarot card to Hinata is considered a good relationship with the Hyuga clan. It is true that the author did not have enough writing power when writing the substitute (Billy), which seemed sloppy. The author comes out to take the blame! Emmm, this is your fault... This book follows a relaxed flow.You can ask some questions, but I don't think it is necessary to ask questions in an unfriendly tone, even though the author relies on the reader's grandfather for a living. But the relationship between the author and the reader is equal. If you think there are some poisonous points, you can point them out, but there is no need to criticize them. Everyone's thoughts are not exactly the same. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people (suddenly wanting to bloom😆😆) It is normal to have different opinions. Remember not to be a troll (it doesn't rhyme at all) I hope everyone can have a friendly discussion. ←to be continued Your next sentence is: Standard ending!
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About the book review section and the current status of this book
Let me start by saying that I am now able to accept different voices and criticisms. The negative review with the most likes has been hanging for almost a month. I also expected to get more guidance from this book review, but the result was not. The protagonist of this book is not based on myself. Some of the experiences may be based on my own experiences, but the character is definitely not. The goal of this protagonist is to change Naruto in his own way. This book is not a dark and dark story. Dongsei is also using his own way to change the perhaps annoying characters in the original work, such as Sakura. I have spent a lot of pen and ink writing about how Sakura gradually became brave, no longer only followed Sasuke and lost herself, but became more responsible and reliable. Sasuke will also be the target of transformation next. I have to admit that this is a group portrait article, and I used it to practice group portrait writing, including trying original stand-ins. This is a challenge and difficult to write. Therefore, if there are many negative reviews, it is acceptable for the book to have unsatisfactory results. But in the end I still have to say, it should be done right. Nowadays, many people, including me, will judge whether a book is worth clicking on or not based on book reviews. The author also needs to be right, so I am going to start deleting reviews. Please forgive me. I won't hide and delete comments. Being polite first and then fighting may not be suitable to describe the current situation. However, in my opinion, I will delete some negative comments that are not nutritious or about parts that I have no time to change.
The world is misspelled. . . .
It should be the world, you spelled it as would
I can't understand why the protagonist gave away the substitute's ability so rashly. Doesn't the author know what it means not to pass on lightly? I don't know what it means to win over rice and hate rice? It's not that you can't give it away, but it's too frivolous to give it away. Others won't cherish something that's easy to get.
Share golden fingers and play with eggs, just watch as many eggs as you want. The fandom is already a niche, and Goldfinger is also a niche. Now, the uniqueness of the protagonist is gone, and there is no other shining point with a stand-in. At this point, it is not as good as the original character, and it is no problem to be marginalized directly. No matter what others say, the willpower is still stronger than that of modern people, not to mention that they have other shining points.
I don't understand why a free boy gives out substitutes everywhere. I won't talk about Hinata. She is the protagonist's own person. What the hell is Sakura giving away golden fingers when she is completely unfamiliar with her? . .
There is only one reason why I read fan fiction! That is, I want to see a different plot development that does not deviate from the original work! The author did it. He wholesaled the plug-ins of the protagonist of the time-travel novel, that is, the protagonist's special characteristics. The most important thing is the uncertain and diverse ability type of the stand-in! This results in the protagonist losing his specialness! I don't know about the others, but it's a poison point for me.
I think the introduction should be written like this: Orochimaru: In my short career as a ninja, I understand that humans have limits, and I am no longer a human! East Star! Wryyyyyyyyy~ ,,jojo,bgm:~ :jo! Deidara: I just want to live a peaceful life, wait! Where did the escort car come from? ! Kujo Tosei: Kaguya-sama, there is only one reason why you lost to me, because your posture is not as cool as mine!
The setting of Isaac is very good, but the substitute is a bit redundant. It is poisonous to give substitutes to others.
I thought it was okay when I looked at the front, but when I saw Cesar Jiang, I couldn't stand it anymore (Author, you are so beautiful)
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Personally, I think the stand-in ability should not be shared, Danzo is not a show-off. And why are you sharing it with no backup plan?
Why isn't my Isaac's fire and brimstone so strong?
Sharing cheats is unacceptable
Feel free to give the power of the system to others, it's too poisonous!
It's not that you can't give them away, but what you give them is of some value! Either it is someone you are very close to who is working for you, or you are creating an organization of your own armed forces or subordinates. What you are giving is meaningless and will only make readers disgusted. I will not talk about the poison. I agree with sharing, but you have to see how to share! The results are just like this. If you don't believe it, just read it. Those who can accept the poison of this book are JoJo fans or Ether fans or those who think that the avatar is similar to Ben's skills and have a B level can barely tolerate it. But it is not necessarily true for those who just like to read fanfiction or ordinary readers. It is useless to say more. I am not criticizing this book, and I don't mean to criticize it. I feel that the writing is very good. I am just afraid that the book will not get good results and the author does not know it, and then he will be eunuched directly because of the poor results! I don't hate this book per se!
After reading Chapter 20, it was said that the protagonist is eleven years old, and now it is said that the protagonist is 13 years old. It's so confusing. Even if the protagonist took purple medicine, his real age should be 11 years old and three.
I found that 90% of the people who abandoned this book were because of the substitute, and the most important thing is that the author did not justify himself. Have you seen that there are so many complaints and abandonments in other novels about giving opportunities? Absolutely not. The biggest problem of the author is that he cannot justify himself, which gives people a poisonous feeling.
I originally wanted to give a recommendation vote to support it, but forget it, the book is already niche, and Golden Hand is even more niche. The behavior of the protagonist is even more uncomfortable. No wonder the results are so poor. There is indeed a reason.
I see that many people feel bad about sharing avatars, so I would like to share my opinion. The golden finger of the protagonist is that his substitute is the invincible Platinum Star, and he himself will grow into the strongest substitute messenger worthy of this substitute, instead of just possessing something that others do not have.