The Puppeteer of Academy City

The name of the protagonist..., Big brother! It's 8012 years old, why do you still have a name that smells like a third-rate ancient novel (｀Д´*)

To express my personal feeling, it is best not to write about mainland China... After all, as long as you write about it, no matter it is good or bad, someone will tear it up (ಡωಡ)

It's rare to see a two-dimensional fan novel on Qidian. I finished reading it in one day and now it's past one o'clock. I'm no longer lonely. . . I feel pretty good about the plotヾ ^_^♪ Actually, I only watched Railgun and not Magic Forbidden. The author needs to work hard to update. I feel a little dizzy (=_=) and I feel like my words can't make sense. No matter,,, as for the characters, I just hope there won't be a harem. The harem will definitely be abandoned. I prefer Hitomi Shiranui. I feel like an old married couple. . . I can't imagine how awkward it would be to be with Sister Pao😓. In addition, although the character of the male protagonist is full of flaws, it is what Chuni anime fans have said, but I hope it is not a one-sided battle. The author's creation of Hitomi's unique position should play a redemptive role in the later plots. Only by thinking can the characters grow and the characters be fleshed out. Of course, it mainly depends on the author's writing. Warning x1: Don't pursue artistic effects and write Hitomi to death. . . I have also seen someone mention the issue of plot rhythm. My opinion is that as a fan novel, respect the original work and focus on creation. The rhythm of the original work and the rhythm of the novel do not have to correspond one to one. After all, the soul of the novel is the characters, and the plot is to shape the characters rather than the characters to suit the plot. The author must be aware of this while maintaining interest😄😒😒 Go to sleep. I should be fattened up before killing.

How should I put it? It's not impossible for fans to add additional settings, but if there are too many, it will change the taste. Personally, I think a large part of the reason why readers read fanfics is because they hope there will be a slight variation without affecting the normal plot flow of the original work. I can only say that there are many irrational readers who keep saying that if the ending of the plot is not changed, why do they read the same novel? However, if there is any change, these readers will disappear without a word.        ， I think most authors don't have the energy or writing skills to make changes like harem hordes, changing the ending, or deus ex machina. Indiscriminate changes will only make readers feel that they are full of flaws and poisonous points. I can't read this work until I've only read the fifty-fifth chapter. A large amount of text has customized a system and opponent settings for the protagonist. In the confrontation between Kanzaki and Kamijou in the original work, the protagonist has no problem inserting himself into the battle. The enemy is dropped from the sky and takes over the role. A large number of settings are added to the enemy, and the length even exceeds the battle in the original work. I think the author may have failed to consider this. Personally, I feel that it has exceeded the definition of the word fan.        ，，

I talked so much and wrote so much because I was really pissed off. What I wrote earlier was really good. Unfortunately, when I saw the scene where Shiranui was kidnapped together, I couldn't stand it anymore. The more I liked it in the early stage, the angrier I am now. I looked at the fan list, and I was ranked 107th just by simply subscribing there. Take a look at me In the front, the number of fans is about the same, including the monthly tickets, which shows that that paragraph dissuaded many people who were originally subscribing... For a complete book of more than 2 million words, the total number of subscriptions is less than a few dozen. Author, you really use your love to generate electricity. I admire this. If you write this book to amuse yourself, then just think that my previous comment is just a fart.

Shiranui(:з∠)_

Can the author explain the protagonist's pathological sense of justice? Even though he was being chased and beaten because of the original code, and then couldn't defeat Accelerator, he still insisted on protecting his sister. This is not like a person who has had fighting experience since childhood. The sense of violation is too strong. With the character of the protagonist, wouldn't it be possible to just grab a random passerby as a prisoner and be restrained? This is no longer in line with human thought... I don't object to saving people, and the Holy Mother does not object, but you must know what it means to act within your ability.

I feel like the plot is progressing too slowly now, so I decided to add more chapters. Find a reason: a monthly ticket will add a chapter, a reward of 100 points will add a chapter, and they will be settled together during weekend breaks. The previous ones will be added slowly.

I've read a few Magic Forbidden fandoms and all of them like Misaka Mikoto as the main character, but I still like Shokuhou Misaki.

I'll do it! There is no good fan of the Demon Ban 🤓 (Manual dog head)